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BloodLily16 [2017-02-03 02:31:41 +0000 UTC]

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I want to start this off by saying that, while I appreciate what you were trying to do with the background, I'm not sure what the red and green and things are. I'm assuming they're supposed to be roses, but they don't look very rose-like at all. I'm not sure, at all, what the area she's standing in is supposed to be.

Also, the lighting looks nice, but I'm not sure where it's coming from. (Front, back, the sides.) I feel like it's supposed to be coming from two directions, in which case you need to make two separate layers for each of the shadows.

I'm also not sure what's supposed to be going on with the anatomy here. The arms look wonky, and the hands look far too small. For the hands, you can scale up the sketch until it looks better, an for the arms you can use the 'T' method, where you draw the hands, draw the shoulders, and then sketch a line between them, with another line crossing through the center. The forearms and upper arms are the same length as the head (unless you're doing XXXHolic people).

Also, the legs are weirdly positioned so that it looks like she's missing a leg, and her neck connects to her head too far to the left. I also think that the odango on her head doesn't look connected like they should. (Also the loose hair should probably have a little more volume.)

The fuku looks nice, but there are too many random folds on the sleeves, and the bow looks like it's been propped out at an odd angle.

Also, the effects. They look nice, but they're a bit too prominent. I'm try easing up on, and varying the opacity on, the sparkles, and for the glitter effects as well.

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Shipping-Guy [2017-02-01 19:23:36 +0000 UTC]

Usagi/Serena is really pretty

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