Rationalist-v-Artist [2012-04-02 21:15:51 +0000 UTC]
I love the emotion and anger you've put into this poem. "Beats the ground" and the personification of the flowers. Your use of rhetorical questions really denote sarcasm. I'm guessing the poem you read didn't side with God, so I couldn't help but be reminded of Job with your stanza "So a poet said once..." which I think is very clever on your part.It's somehow breathtaking to read such powerful thought in such a wonderful form
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JuliusScipio In reply to Rationalist-v-Artist [2012-04-02 23:09:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!It wasn't my main thought, but Job was there at my side as I wrote. I love the book of Job-- love it to death!^^
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