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Description Solitude is waiting to be ended,
It is an emptiness, a thing to be filled,
Tilled ground to be seeded,
Lovely country to be colonized,
   A nice orchard.

It is the calm which bursts forth into
Ecstatic oneness, the calm which calls forth
From the sea Dukes and Italians and desposits them
  On the shore to be
    Taught or joined.

Solitude was meant to be filled,
A cup which calls for red wine
The womb which calls for fruit
  A woman who whispers in the night
   And shifts...

It is the red dawn before battle is joined
When a man can look up with a wild grin
And know that his glory is coming and not
  Think at all of death or
    The cost of things.

Solitude is the space between a man and his
Wife, the stillness of red sheets and
The slow spread of smiles and
  A quiet moment being filled
   The sound of silence leaving in peace, a prisoner to whispers
Planted in Solitude.
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Comments: 9

TexasDreamer01 [2012-03-21 19:12:16 +0000 UTC]

Kind of like meditation, yes?

An interesting correlation: [link]

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JuliusScipio In reply to TexasDreamer01 [2012-03-21 19:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!

A lacuna is a hole, and I was thinking of lacunae in regards to activity, holes in the stream of movement and thought.

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TexasDreamer01 In reply to JuliusScipio [2012-03-21 19:33:14 +0000 UTC]

That's... interesting. I must write something on that.

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LadyScipio [2012-02-24 04:09:55 +0000 UTC]

This makes me feel warm. Warm and Safe. ^^

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Rationalist-v-Artist [2012-02-18 21:51:00 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this one. It reminds us of the happiness solitude can bring and that space to reflect on life. As ever, a fantastic piece of poetry

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JuliusScipio In reply to Rationalist-v-Artist [2012-02-18 21:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^_^

Solitude can work wonders!

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Ask-bubble-berry [2012-02-14 13:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww I love this! It kinda makes me wanna cry though

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JuliusScipio In reply to Ask-bubble-berry [2012-02-14 20:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps it should.

It's a happy poem, really. It's just a different sort of happiness. I compose poorly in major keys.

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Ask-bubble-berry In reply to JuliusScipio [2012-02-14 21:12:37 +0000 UTC]

It's good though Your gunna go far kid

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