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Arc 1- Part 1: Lionfish Theory

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keeper-loves-writing [2015-06-28 15:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Okay and here we have yet another version of the Prometheus' story. I'm actually not sure anymore which aspects matched which versions of the earlier stories, but I might go back again and try to figure it out
But I can only repeat myself: I like the fact that your reader has to accompany your characters and puzzle over the same mysteries as them - yet on another level because as a reader you get more information due to the changes in POV.

And really, the moment, when it said: "It was a place accessible only to those with strong magic, and those good at getting stuck in places they shouldn't be in (children)", I though: "Oh crap ..."
Maybe it should have been obvious, but I was so concentrated on the story itself that this revelation took me by surprise - again. It is a really clever way to mix the different levels of the story. I like that!

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Junedays In reply to keeper-loves-writing [2015-06-29 02:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The multiple versions of stories is especially important because it concerns the nature of reality in the comic--or maybe the lack of it Also, the theme of history sort of 'haunting' characters is a really important one. Glad you caught on immediately!!

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SashaWren [2014-12-30 18:18:19 +0000 UTC]

oh my lord this is amazing

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alexiuss [2013-06-10 03:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Amazing comic so far, this section is super hard to read though, it could really use speech bubbles or darkness under text!

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Junedays In reply to alexiuss [2013-06-10 18:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you--I think I'll do that, or just turn all the letter white. I'm still working on formatting XD

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