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JustACapharnaum — It happened here
Published: 2017-10-23 07:08:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 337; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description They had seen and heard 
dead stars collide,
The violent process
of the gold and silver.

The galaxy
happened here.
The universe:
Cosmic fabric
stampeding hopes
of the long-sought mysteries.

Atoms threaten us all,
In cosmic gong
reverberated across the heavens.

This happened:
The shrunken stars,
The masses,
Magnetic fields,
The cloud of gold
conforming ancient cosmic alchemy. 

She was gravitational waves,
The field of my universe
....Joy.
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Comments: 5

Acerbical [2017-10-24 19:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Hey J!

Brilliant piece from you again as per usual. This is truly impressive and beautiful. 

I like that you can feel the words, my favourite lines are:
"She was gravitational waves,
The field of my universe
....Joy.

Keep up the awesome work!

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JustACapharnaum In reply to Acerbical [2017-11-16 07:14:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your feedback, I am glad you enjoy it

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MethusulaComics [2017-10-23 13:30:03 +0000 UTC]

nice.

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JustACapharnaum In reply to MethusulaComics [2017-11-16 07:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you  

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MethusulaComics In reply to JustACapharnaum [2017-11-16 13:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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