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K-L-ee β Pink-Footed Booby
Published: 2010-05-23 04:28:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1200; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Pen, water colors, some lipstick I, at first, unintentionally dabbed onto the picture, and the magic of Photoshop.
A warm welcome to you guys over at Gimme Feedback! Thanks for taking the time to check this piece out and critique it! I don't want this to sound like a copout, but I have a sort of broad, "can't put my finger on it" issue with this picture. I feel like there something wrong with it, but I can't figure out what, and it's eating my up inside. Eating me up like a Grue.
Like.
A.
Grue.
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Any tips would be incredibly helpful! Help me put an end to this pain
--K.L.
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Comments: 25
I like it! Nice pun too ~
Something wrong with it?
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Hard to say...
It's art; totally subjective.
If I may ask? When you look over your work here, is there a certain part of the page that increases your unease?
Personally, I find her eyes a bit disconcerting, but that's just me.
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Why must you flatter me so?
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because, it is my sole purpose in life.
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Your sole purpose is awesome!
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Nice concept! And the lipstick is really unique and effective. It makes me want a little more subtle detail, especially around the faces, though. Mostly the stylised look is awesome, but I somehow expect more there. 
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Youβve hit the nail on the head! Thatβs precisely my conundrum! I feel like there should be something more, but I canβt put my finger on what
Thank you so much for your critique! I really appreciate it!
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Glad I could be of some use.
And that is an awesome plz! My word.
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Indeed, it is. Hell of a lot better than this one:
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Gorgeous. The splashes of pink are what make his so eye-catching and fun... lipstick you say?
The neck seems a bit long to me, though that can easily be stylistic; her ribcage also seems a bit too broad for her shoulders. I love the thick lines of her eyes and face, though!
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Yup, lipstick. While I was drawing, I must have touched my lip and then touched the paper, and it left a pink mark on the bird's face. I thought it looked pretty sweet, so I continued :'D If you look closely, you can sort of see my finger print on her left cheek.
Yeah, the ribcage is definitely too broad. That's always been a problem for me--conecting torsos and arms
Thank you for the fav and the comment! I appreciate it!
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Completely understandable - I tend to draw anime style, which gives a long, leggy look, and girls with thick thighs and wider hips - so if I try to draw a thin girl, or shorter proportions, it comes out weird.
This is a good resource for anatomy - [link]
And this is good for putting it all in poses - [link]
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Oh, thank you for the sites! Hopefully I can learn a thing or two from them :'D
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realistic.
beautiful.
your females remind me of a certain graffiti artist I once saw who draws her own little girls onto walls and junk. her name is miss van i think you should check her work out.
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Oh wow! I'm flattered! I just looked up her work, and she's incredible! To remind you of her is a hefty compliment indeed!
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ah no problemo friend, im totally serious that you remind me of her. its really awesome!
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I love this picture and the fact that you didn't make her a triple D makes it that much better!!
The lipstick works!
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