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K-Lynnette — Jordan Kosmisch Deux
Published: 2007-10-14 02:01:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 561; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 7
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just messing around with a sketch I drew a while back. I might redo this later, I dunno. we'll see.Jordan Kosmisch © me
[her last name is pronounced koz-mish]
I fail at bright colourz, lol. This was definitely a trek out of my comfort zone, as most of you may notice I like usuing cool colours to shade my stuff XB ZOMG A LEGITIMATE FINISHED PIECE APOCALYPSE ZOMG!!!
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this is such a powerful piece! it's so "in your face"!
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heheh thanks. I think what I like most about it is the angle and the warm colours. Warm colours make such a vivid impression, don't you think?
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hahhaa super-special awesome is all i gotta say about a sketch
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I figured you deserved to have the comments with the actual deviation...hope you don't mind...
So here’s what I said before in chat:
“Great angle and extreme perspective! Watch the contour….you should bring the bat out just enough to show its end shape more in the contour (silhouette). Also, the name is fighting off the depth. Maybe make it smaller and try for a perspective approach on the letters as well! Love the lighting…really makes it more imposing.
With contours, consider it the image blacked out...can you tell what the image is at all? How's the positive and negative shapes? Balanced? etc..”
So…..back to that thing about the name I mentioned. Maybe you can just throw it along the bottom ride edge…or at least something to consider next time around.
It’s just a pity to see it distracting from the great up shot. I also just took better notice of the cigarette. Nice smoke…although it gets a bit lost with the BG. The BG is nice too! I like the texture, lighting and effects you have going…tops off the feel.
Glad to have had you participate in the Comics Week Critique Chat.
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Really amazing...i always loved that style of reflection over the glasses.
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holy crap dont hit me!! but seriously awesome job looks great.
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Very very nice perspective and I like te colors too ^^
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You should defiantly delve into those off perspectives some more. It will really help the rest of your drawings, even if they aren't in a wonky perspective ^^ That kind of view requires a little more attention to detail and anatomy to correctly achieve those kinds of perspectives. Something I am struggling with is achieving odd perspectives...and I sound like an art teacher in this comment...
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thanks ^ ^ definite trek out of my comfort zone... bright colours and wonky perspective. EPIC ADVENTURE FOR K. XD
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You should defiantly delve into those off perspectives some more. It will really help the rest of your drawings, even if they aren't in a wonky perspective ^^ That kind of view requires a little more attention to detail and anatomy to correctly achieve those kinds of perspectives. Something I am struggling with is achieving odd perspectives...and I sound like an art teacher in this comment...
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that's okay, the more you sound like a teacher, the more you effectively teach yourself and others ;D thanks
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I think you did a grat job using the bright colors it looks fantastic and I love the background
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This kinda reminds me of an evil version on Shaun of the Dead...is that even possible? LMFAO
Anyways, this is like...epic win.~
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