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...guess thatβs itIt is all gone
Gone to quit
Quit before I yawn
Yawn myself to sleep
Sleep to escape
Escape from the weep
Weep through the moonscape
Moonscape is my life
Life is my down fall
Fall to more strife
Strife reaches a new tall
Tall I started out
Out of all the mess
Mess became blackouts
Blackouts that make me guess...
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Kabs (Aged 17)
01/10/2008
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Comments: 3
Actually, I love abab couplet structures. This was a great cycling poem.
As for rejection, I'm sorry. I wish you luck with love, it will come someday...
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You've never given up to me, I really appreciate that.
I normally write in ABAB structure, so you're in luck.
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