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Kabs — Passing by
Published: 2008-01-13 23:33:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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That’s all she doesThat’s all…
…she ever does
It’s all I can recall
I see her for one second
And she’s gone by the next one
At first, my heart softened
Then, in need of a hangman
She just kept walking
So gracefully
I see her eyes glimpsing
At something, but not me
Those beautiful brown eyes
The flowing hair kissing her soft skin
Thanks to the sky’s sighs
Seem to be an important kin
That heart-warming smile
I could never forget
She makes my life worthwhile
Though she also makes me upset
It’s clearly not her fault
All she does is walk
My heart, locked in a vault
With her and an emotional lock
To be with her
Is to free my heart
But if she’s a rejecter
My soul and I will part
Inflicting emotional pain as such
Because of her, I want to die
But she isn’t doing much
Just…passing by
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Kabs (Aged 16)
13/01/2008
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Comments: 11
You can never compare poems to eachother, each one is unique, I'm sure your poetry isn't that bad.
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I've read one already, and it wasn't bad...you liar!
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lol, but i didnt know you'd think that did i?
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awesome work here. I'm no poet genius but it is very touching, what you write. 
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omg, i so felt like that in year 7-dam, i hope nobody heard that....WELL THEN, MY LAD U R WORKING AND SURPASSED BEYOND THE EXPECTED STANDARD OF THE HISTORY OF EDWARD VIIIIII IN THE AGE OF- forget it. kabs well done, really like the poem
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Already forgotten...thanks.
VIIIIII = XI <--Try writing that next time.
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O.o.... allllllllllrighty then
nice poem
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