Comments: 24
Essileth [2011-10-10 01:12:21 +0000 UTC]
OH
THIS IS KICK AISH
OH MY GOODNESS
GIRL
GIRL.
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Kae-Yn In reply to Essileth [2011-10-12 02:01:46 +0000 UTC]
AND JUST YOU WAIT
I'ma get better
Or at lest edit this piece sometime later
I've been getting good advice from other artists c:
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Kae-Yn In reply to FireballStardraco [2011-10-12 01:47:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad I didn't give up on it!
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1oooinkstains [2011-09-28 00:53:30 +0000 UTC]
It may not look as stormy as you wanted, but the waves look amazing! I couldn't draw waves like that if my life depended on it! I can draw people well enough but those aint people lol.
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Kae-Yn In reply to 1oooinkstains [2011-09-28 02:12:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! It took me a while before I got the waves to look sorta right c:
The process of the piece was divided into two halves. First I worked on the serpent, then I wrestled the ocean...or should it be the other way around?
Hehe, people are their own kind of difficult XD
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1oooinkstains In reply to Kae-Yn [2011-09-28 02:19:36 +0000 UTC]
Hey, all good things take time and your process is your process. And people aren't really that hard to do if you practice a lot. I've been practicing since 6th grade and I'm in tenth grade now so take that as you will haha.
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Kae-Yn In reply to 1oooinkstains [2011-09-28 02:29:33 +0000 UTC]
Yes it is, and I'm not rushing it...actually, I'd probably feel put off of art if I focused on improving, really. I started drawing people about two years ago...I just dug up the pictures, so I could re-use the binder...but gosh. XD
That's funny, since I'm in 10th grade, too
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Tiger-Guard [2011-09-27 06:52:24 +0000 UTC]
Yes this is prove that you are improving in your art, you're getting better at backgrounds than you were before, about the sea not looking stormy I'm not sure how big the sea serpent(?) is but it looks large so the waves look more stormy to me than you likely think.
If you could improve on something it would be the clouds they were too white if you were aiming for stormy as that usually means storm clouds, they also could be hmm more solid looking? The whites ones just look a little to wispy and white for the scene is all.
The serpent(?) themselves is well done, colours blended well and not too bold for the rest of them scene, the sizes of the head and neck match well too for the type of creature they are.
You really are improving and I'll be cheering you on the whole way =^-^=
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Kae-Yn In reply to Tiger-Guard [2011-09-27 23:38:33 +0000 UTC]
Glad I am heading somewhere in the general direction of improvement. I've been at a stalemate with it for a while. I think the overall color and atmosphere helps it look stormier than how I see it, so if you don't look at it for too long to notice the gentle waves, there shouldn't be much of a problem, I guess XD
I actually didn't know where to go with the clouds. Maybe I should go look up some references for them. I probably would've let them be if you hadn't pointed that out...they do look more like the misty type, don't they?
...yes, let's call it a sea serpent c: I actually believe that the head is a bit too small, but the sea serpent is all on one layer, and I'd rather not mess with it too much.
But thank you for your comments! It helps me look at it from a different perspective, and helps me improve as well c: Its wonderful to know you'll be supporting me along the way~
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Tiger-Guard In reply to Kae-Yn [2011-09-28 06:55:02 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm not sure 'bout the clouds either, but maybe making them more solid and them using a smudge tool on them? Not sure, and if you really wanted to be better stormy waves in future, more height and more stray to the waves that should make 'em better.
Well I'll be planning to support you in better ways in the future =^-^=
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KylieKattu [2011-09-27 01:27:59 +0000 UTC]
Woahhh this guy's pretty bright o: And really cool looking!!!!!!!!!!!
SUPER SUGOI KAE-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111111111eleven
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Kae-Yn In reply to KylieKattu [2011-09-27 01:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Pffttttttt. What are you even-
...
arigatou gozaimashita c:
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KylieKattu In reply to Kae-Yn [2011-09-27 01:39:33 +0000 UTC]
ใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใใงใ
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Kae-Yn In reply to KylieKattu [2011-09-27 01:42:25 +0000 UTC]
ใกใใจ ใใใใ ใงใใญ...
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KylieKattu In reply to Kae-Yn [2011-09-27 01:46:11 +0000 UTC]
but.........................BUT..........................
ใใใใฏใญใใใใใงใ )':
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Kae-Yn In reply to KylieKattu [2011-09-27 01:51:20 +0000 UTC]
ใใใใ ใญใใ ใใใงใ.
ใงใใ ใใใใซ ใฏใชใ ใใ ใใ.
I don't think I did that right
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KylieKattu In reply to Kae-Yn [2011-09-27 03:22:40 +0000 UTC]
................ ใชใ!!!!!!!!!!
I think it's hanashi instead of hanasu \o/
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Kae-Yn In reply to KylieKattu [2011-09-27 03:33:50 +0000 UTC]
;3;
It's hanasu, becuase that's the te form used when you're not using the masu form. It's hanasu kudasai, because when you are using kudasai, you cannot use the masu form
...
/;3;/
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KylieKattu In reply to Kae-Yn [2011-09-27 03:39:15 +0000 UTC]
oh yeah
I never cared about the te forms much
hehehe
\o/\o/\o/\o/\o/
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windy-shenanigans [2011-09-27 00:21:06 +0000 UTC]
SECOND FIRST COMMENT
Kae, that is sooo pretty!! I can't wait till your slots are open on MagiStream
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Kae-Yn In reply to windy-shenanigans [2011-09-27 00:45:59 +0000 UTC]
Pffttt. Saying first comment is unneccessary
But thank you! I am really happy with how it turned out c:
Do you have a MagiStream? : o They probably won't be open for a while though. I've had a lot of work since the start of school :c
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