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Published: 2018-04-29 01:36:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 80562; Favourites: 700; Downloads: 53
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I've been wanting to so this for a long while and I'm really excited to get started!! I present to you guys the first page of Broken Crown, my Lion King fancomic centering around Sarafina's life. Right now I'll be trying to keep the update schedule to once-a-week.
I introduce you guys to Sarafina, Kaarina, and Dani!
Beginning: You're here!!
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May I ask for the meaning of their names? I mean Dani and Kaarina
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started reading this comic and imΒ now in love with it! great job!
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OOOOO I CANT WAIT!!! I love your art style so much seeing it in comic format is soooo cool!!
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omggggggg. I love it already. I am a big fan of your style
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Looking good so far~Β Their mother's design is pretty!
Kaarina is finnish name by the way :'D I thought that was nice little fact to tell
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Ohhh interesting! I keep looking forward to the next page
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This is gorgeous and loving the story so far :3Β
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I look forward to this idea since we don't know much about Sarafina! Really loving Dani's design. The only thing though is that I found it a bit hard to read the words in the narrative. The font's nice but I think the size needs to be slightly bigger. Otherwise, really good first page and I look forward to the next!
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Thank you for your input!! I went ahead and changed the formatting for dialogue in future pages, hopefully it's easier to read now!
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