HOME | DD
Kakamaking β Biitu
Published: 2013-06-01 00:41:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1199; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 12
Redirect to original
Description
I wanted to use some tubes, rahkshi shells, and hordika feet, and I got this.I wanted this guy to be a mysterious bounty hunter who used to be of Brutaka's race. I added this big old helmet on him to ask the question of what he actually looks like. you can see here a jump pack and some green shreds of armor sticking out here and there.
Related content
Comments: 20
this is looking more and more like cherno alpha when I look at it.
π: 0 β©: 2
Ha! You're right, but I can promise you the inspiration was all my own.
π: 0 β©: 1
it was made before pacificΒ rim so I believe you XDΒ
π: 0 β©: 0
Okay so you wanted my feedback on this. First of all, if you reupload the photo collage as a Jpg or PNG and not a PDF, it won't look like this. It'll be a regular photo in a Deviation.
As for the MOC my first impression is that all the parts are nicely kept in a monochrome color scheme. I had to read the description before noticing some of what I thought was black was dark green. That may be a lighting or photo editing issue, I'm not sure. The build is quite interesting, there's simple parts with really interesting custom elements over top of it it seems. The torso and head are definitely the best parts of this MOC, the Arms and legs suffice though in my opinion. I'm with Vedkarr on the hips though. Maybe that's on purpose but if you bulk that up then he'll probably have a really solid look all the way through him.
My only other complaints are about the MOC, but with the last three things you've posted, the photo editing. I suggest more uniform and possibly smaller photos so you can have more photos per single collage without it being huge. or at least adding more than two extra images of some weird angle, then a full shot. I suggest one full shot from the front and the back, then what ever else you want to highlight. Hope all this helps. Keep up the great work KK
π: 0 β©: 1
Thanks, I see the hip's issue and I think I can finish him with a couple tweaks.
With better editing and the real changes to the MOC itself.
π: 0 β©: 1
Why do I have to download this? Is this something new Deviantart is doing?
π: 0 β©: 4
Oh durr, he uploaded it as a PDF, that's why.
π: 0 β©: 0
Yeah I got the same thing. Its as if Adobe reader is showing this thing. That's what you use when you DL instructions from lego....weird.
π: 0 β©: 0
same thing happened to me...
π: 0 β©: 1
Sorry man, it wasn't doing that over here. Must be your browser.
π: 0 β©: 2
It's not, you uploaded a bloody PDF and not an image file.
π: 0 β©: 1
I'll export it to PNG and fix it.
π: 0 β©: 0
I mean that it's not showing up as a normal picture. It has a scroll bar, it looks like when I download instructions from LEGO.com. However I'm still viewing it on Deviantart.
π: 0 β©: 1
Hold on, I'll try to fix it...
π: 0 β©: 0
Reminds me of some kind of alien bounty hunter, so well done with the concept. I love how the arm armor tucks into the torso and retains plenty of flexibility, looks good.
One nitpick: The hips, the point where the legs meet the torso, look awfully bare and thin.
Suggestion: If you have any more of those silver teeth, could a couple be added to the hordika feet on the arms? (to create a better transition from the shoulder to the arm.)
Overall, this looks great
π: 0 β©: 1
Np, Your MOCs are great
π: 0 β©: 0