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shadowsfaith [2004-03-17 08:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Warning: Constructive critism ahead, if you are sensitive please avoid reading any further. Again, you have been warned!

Ok first off I'd just like to say that I love your designs! Their so creative! I also think you did an excellent job on the faces. Now here comes the critisim...

The King: He looks pretty good, only a couple things I'd like to point out. His right hand (our left) is fine, but her hair should be moved or parted to show that he's reaching from behind her. The other thing is his body...or lack thereof. I understand the position but she is rather thin and I think at least part of his body would show behind her.

The Queen: Ok, like I said her face is excellent but I think you need to work a bit on the body. (please don't kill me!) Her shoulders are excellently spaced and drawn but I think you made the area between her chest and shoulders too long. Maybe if you brought her chest up a bit..also try not to make them so round. ^.^;; Have the top lines point towards the underarm line and not quite as long. The arms and hands are another part that you seem to have done very well. Kudos, I still have issues with both those areas. The abodomen and waist area is another place that I think could use work. Make the area wider so as to be able to hold up her chest and shoulders...right now she looks a bit narrow. Last thing I swear! Her legs are awkward for the way she's standing. Bring them together instead of apart. Another thing you could do is have the left leg (our right) wider, to give it the apperance of being in front of the right.

Again you did wonderfully on the faces and the designs are beautiful! THe hair is also nicely illustrated except for that one problem I mentioned before....again please don't kill me!

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goochtek [2004-03-17 07:51:00 +0000 UTC]

You're right, they are falling, I can see it.
Kind of slowly, and to the right.

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