Comments: 10
brushtrail [2009-09-16 13:08:53 +0000 UTC]
;-; Woooow...
That monologue by The Apparition really got to me. Even though Ysef is the victor, in reality, no one wins. What a twist! xD
My favorite panels include the ones with Ysef and Roz's wishes - Ysef wants to reclaim his power as "Dark Lord Acri'Amol" while Roz wants to be with her sister...
The one thing about this deviation that I love the most is the "shattered glass" part. As I read my way to the bottom - crack...crack...SMASH! Everything falls apart! It's so symbolic! I love it!!! Excellent job!!!
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NightMargin [2009-09-13 01:08:09 +0000 UTC]
I like the choice for Appy monologue here. It's very fitting!
The last panels are INSANE *A*
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Corpse-Face [2009-09-13 00:44:54 +0000 UTC]
Eskaed makes one last appearence in Ysef's eyeballs.
*shot*
ARGHHH THIS JUST BLEW ME AWAY THOUGH, SERIOUSLY. 8CC
I felt emotionally drained after reading this. In a good way. Its just so amazing. <3
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kalkie In reply to Corpse-Face [2009-09-13 00:53:27 +0000 UTC]
Yea- I found myself thinking, 'I'm drawing a lot of sand today' while I was doing all this. XD
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DarkTail67 [2009-09-12 20:58:01 +0000 UTC]
SCREW the dialogue! The images are worth a thousand words! |D
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Dreamwish [2009-09-12 13:55:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow. The story of this and the writing is just stunning. And that last shot with all the cracked panels... this is wonderful, Kalkie. I know do to time constraints you weren't able to do what you wanted, but this is still lovely. Amazing job.
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Charvi20 [2009-09-12 06:34:33 +0000 UTC]
You color it~!!
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MikotoNui [2009-09-12 04:57:39 +0000 UTC]
Who cares about the mess that this has gone to? I still say the story is the one that is good! I give this a 8 out of ten!
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ancient-sun [2009-09-12 04:14:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow. Wow. I can't get past the story telling here. It's really good.
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kyri01 [2009-09-12 03:50:37 +0000 UTC]
F*** The bad art! I want to see what happens next!
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