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kalkie — EfN Roz - 2
Published: 2009-09-12 03:34:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 2750; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 17
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One of my biggest peeves overall is my shoddy dialogue.
Ysef is pretty bullheaded.
*starts humming 'It's the end of the world*
Bubbles and text edited by *psychoe
Eskaed belongs to *Myrmadon
Ysef, Thurston and Tellou belong to me
Sheep belongs to *Nightingale628
Roz belongs to ~Izuma
The Apparition belongs to ~Sandy-the-echidna
We're trying to
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Comments: 5
xD Haha! I get such a kick out of Quix de Tellou! What a surprise, a battle with no magic! o.o I wonder how skilled Ysef is in sword fighting...
Ysef seems really serious in this round, even more serious than previous rounds. <:3 I love his eyes in the 9th panel; they're gorgeous!
Eek! T-the Apparition!
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He's more of a mace-wielder than sword. XD; and his technique is more 'crush-crush-blasts away with magic'. But since there's no magic- just crush all the way XD
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PIPE FIGHT. Possibly the most badass fight in EfN so far.
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YOUR DIALOGUE IS NOT SHODDY. >8C
It's poetic. (Especially towards the end)
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Accck, that scary Apparation at the bottom scares me. Go Ysef, go!
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