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I wanted to draw her for so long! Here she is! The beautiful Scathach!What do you think about it?
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No it's Scathach from FGO.
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oh ,ok ^^
what does FGO stand for?
I am sorry I donΒ΄t know the Manga/ Anime 
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To confuse you even more, that's not a manga/anime but a mobile game! It's Fate/Grand Order. It's really popular and it's a gacha game. Which means that you have to pay for a lottery to try to get the characters you want. It's fun at times, but can but frustrating too.
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ah, ok ^^ ... thanks for the info
donΒ΄t worry, it doesnΒ΄t confuse me ^^ ... I hear this from time to time that some characters are from Games and not from Mangas/Animes 
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Love it! Scathach is a beautiful waifu ^^
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Thanks a lot! I agree with you!
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You did amazing on this! awesome job!!! ^^
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The other commenters were very thorough. I would just like to add a couple things. The area around the navel was very well done, I thought. That was a detail that sometimes gets less attention that it might deserve.
On the other hand, I thought that the arms were the weakest part, particularly her right arm. The lack of definition is in marked contract to the rest of her, even taking the lighting into account. There should be some musculature showing as this arm is supporting her. In addition, the elbow is not quite right.
Since you show that you really do have talent I will cover one last nit pick. The flower in her hair is close enough to us that we should be able to see the details of the pistil and stamen.
I look forward to seeing more from you.
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Thank you!
The arms are not that great, it's true. For the right arm (the one to the left), I took of photo of my arm and looking at it right now, maye that the top of the elbow should be straight. The musculature is absent as you said. I am studying anatomy and it is not easy! I will try to do better next time!
For the flower, you are right. I searched for reference and I found nothing, so I did what I dont' like to do, I drew it from another drawing which was maybe 40x40 pixels.
Thanks again!
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Anatomy and botany are important for artists. There are plenty of close-ups of flowers like the hibiscus (similar to your flower). You can also look up pistil and stamen for detailed looks as well
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I agree with you, I will keep that in mind!
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Hey! Iβd like to start by saying that overall, this is a very impressive work with lovely two-directional lighting, warm atmosphere, and convincing anatomy!
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For improvement, the biggest weakness here is the lack of perspective in the head regions despite strong perspective in the body (which is done very well). Realistically, the head should have more of a top-down perspective or, even if the character is looking straight at the camera, the perspective should be indicated in the neck, which is not present.
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Lastly, I recommend slightly changing up the places where you have thick or thin lines. The increasingly thick line for the forward arm is great and you have the right idea, but the tops of the breasts should not be so thickly/darkly outlined because they are both in the light and not set back as much in space. In addition, the hair lacks the delicacy in line variation, which I assume to be because you drew it first.
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Overall, great painting!
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Thanks a lot!
For the lines, maybe the texture doesn't help, but I know that I don't vary them much and I need to work on this, especially in my manga were lines are even more important than in an illustration.
For the perspective, I agree about the head part, but the neck part I am not sure. The neck disapear really soon as the camera goes up. If the camera goes down, that not the same thing, this time the neck becomes more apparent since it is always tilted to the front.
I'll keep what you said in mind! Thanks again!
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This is an amazing piece of art! I love your style, especially the shading, as if there was a sunset. Her outfit also looks great! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks a lot! I appreciate it!
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This art piece is beautiful and sensual, I'm pretty sure you've nailed everything perfectly but that'd be a boring comment that wouldn't make 200 words so let me go ahead and disect the art piece by piece lol.
First of all, I love the way you've drawn this, all of her features and proportions are SPOT ON especially with the anime/manga style in mind. I love the angle of the shot too it's really... um... flattering -giggity-
Colour, composition and lighting, again are all perfect. There's one main light source which highlights the um... focus of the art. (Boobs and face), I love how you have the reflection of the background colour on the other side of the arm
that brings me to the background, is that a bed sheet? Not quite sure what it is, could of made it clearer with like a pillow or something but that's not even a critique really, that's just me being a picky lil bitch. Seriously though is it a bed? Part of me thinks that it might be water or something?
WAIT! Is that a pillow under her ass there? Make it bigger. The pillow not the ass huehue
Seriously though this piece is perfect in every way, I also love it because I have a thing for brunettes. Love her skirt and bra!
Quick tip: people would pay for NSFW versions of these, like topless
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Thanks!
You brought a good point here, the background, it is water! Really badly done though! Maybe more contrast would have helped, but seriously, it could have been a lot better. And even worse, the pillow, it's her foot!
About your last tip, I am thinking about doing commissions soon. But I don't think I will do nudes.
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My definition of "nude" differs from most people, I don't find topless shots to be distasteful at all but that's just me.
Have a nice day
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Oh I don't mean distasteful! It's not that I don't like drawing nudes, it's that I don't want to be labeled as an artists who draw nudes. Sometimes I get negative comments since many of my characters are lightly clothed, and I find it hard to deal with that. I don't know how much worse it could be with nudes.
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Oooooh okay.
If you some more advice I'm going to give it to you, you don't have to listen to it or not but what I think is that you need to get that "give a fuck" card and throw it out the window lol
with an artist as popular and as talented as you you will ALWAYS get criticism's, some can be helpful and constructive, you can identify these by a couple of things:
they're always helpful, constructive criticisms never attack you as a person or your art really, they offer advice on how to do things better, and they usually praise you on the positive aspects of it as well as anything negative, like my comment for example. I consider that to be constructive.
the unhelpful ones are just assholes who will critique on style of art, like "why do you always draw anime? I hate anime" or something like that. If someone came to my page and told me that they hate 3D I'd tell em to go fuck em selves lol, it has no reflection on me as an artist it's just them and there tastes, they're just being a dick.
If you listen to the none-constructive criticisms you'll never grow as an artist because they'll put you in a box, if you want to draw "nudes" then draw nudes. If you don't, then don't! But make sure it's what YOU want and not what anyone else wants.
also give this video a watch, I think it might help you out a bit
www.youtube.com/watch?v=vM39qhβ¦
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Oh man, thank you for taking the time to write this! I know a lot of artists that draw nudes and they don't seems to be bothered by it. They probably don't care about comments. I think that maybe I will be able to look at this in more objective way when I will be more known since I will have an better idea of what people think about all of this.
I am also a guitarist and I play metal music. At first, I didn't know what to say to people who were saying things about this music, but now, 20 years later, I don't care anymore. I know what I am talking about. Maybe that will be the same thing with drawing someday! I have to kick my ass!
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Awesome! I linked the video because the guy in it talks about drawing pretty girls, when he started people said to him "oh is this all you're gonna draw? Pretty girls?"
so he tried to draw something else and it came out shit, watch it it's pretty funny/entertaining and has a lot of helpful tips!
the moral of that part of the story was to draw what's in your heart, what you're attracted too
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Thanks, I will try to move towards this direction. I haven't watched the video yet, but I will!
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the hair is drawn good. the face is also drawn well. the nose doesnt look like modern manga but it probially just your art style. the eyes look good. i like the grils facial expression. it does a good job showing what emotion she is feeling. the anatomy is drawn correctly. i like how you drew the arms and put detail into the placement of the muscles on the arms.the lines on the arms look a little shakey though. since it is a girl, you drew a colarbone that looks more pronounced and one that a grl would have. sorry i couldnt think of any words to describe it. the breasts are drawn correctly. they were drawn in the correct spot. you did a good job of drawing the bikin to look tight on her decent sized breasts. it can be hard to draw from this angle but you did a really good job drawing the curves. you also did a good job with drawing the folds on the skirt. i like how you put a lot of detail into this drawing. you put deatil into the flower and ribbon. you also put a lot of deatil into the clothes. the only issue i have with this drawing is the linework. the lines dont look smothe and looked like you drew them with a marker that was running out of ink. if you still plan to draw lines like that, try not to make them as thinck and noticeable i like the lighting in this drawing. i can tell where the light source is comming from. the shading ismilimalbut stileffective. overall this is a good drawing thatlookslike you spent a lot of time on. makesure to pay attention to the inking and linework and constantly look at refrences when drawing
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Thanks a lot! For the lines, I usually use a pencil texture (in SAI) and it doesn't show much. This time, I tried a larger grain pencil, and only when doing colors I felt that it was strange... I didn't want to redo the drawing 
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