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i so love how you drew this! never seen any srmthfg comics! rocks!
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Dude you totally inspire me to draw robot monkey stuff and comics. I really need to get around to doing that damn it...
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Huuuuu~ I'd like to see that~ :3
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IT SHALL BE DONE!! oh btw I test ran my uncle's scanner and was playing around with your Kancle drawing in his painting program. Might be one of the first deviations I'll put up....HMM? YES?! NO?! THANK YOU?
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I'm just loving this, the drawings are great.
It's great to go down this way.
oO Problems...? 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yeah evil, I knew you'd love it, and it's quite nice hearing that after so much working time. 
Yeah my mom doesn't want to see me drawing monkeys.
I thought it took some time. >D Of course it'd take me longer, because I never draw this way. This is another reason why I don't get fancy with comics. The more detail the longer it takes and the less time you have to finish if you have a deadline.
Actually what I think....I think I'm gonna eat your face if you don't finish it. XD You made something pretty cool..and I'd like to see it come through. 
I'm curious as to what you used, if it was a pencil or a pen or something. Oo
I know I'm excited about it because my OC is in there, but Kancle, this is amazing. You've blown me away basically. I really doubt I'll finish the other comic I'm working on. xD I look at this and I look at mine and I think...crap. XD I can't do comics. Why do I bother?
So, yeah. Other than me saying it over and over...you can tell I'm quite excited about this, as I wrote a lot. I am very impressed, I. LOVE. IT.
Now..please, finish it. The writing just takes away from the comic, and again I begin to have trouble seeing who is talking and what's going on. If you can't then that's fine, I'll go cry in the corner, but I'm still giving you that awkward hug. < well...it's close. XD
How excitedplz am I.
W-WHAT? xDDD You want me to finish it?!
Well, those are a few years of practice xDDD Once you get the way to draw it, backgrounds become an easy thing to draw. And yes, I use pen and pencil :3 Don't worry, at least your comics don't suck xD really.
But well, you and me know it sucks when somebody doesnt finish a comic so.... Ok I'll do!! xDDD But it would take a looooong time lD Besides, I can't leave the page 5 as it is now :3 Yes, I'll bring page by page until it's finished X)
But btw, well, >< I felt a bit guilty because of the opinion I gave you about your entry, and you didn't tell me anything. I'd really like to know if I did something relaly good or bad, I think I made Razor some calm oO What do you think?
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Well The beginning of your entry was beautiful, I understood what was happening and the grammatical errors were just funny. XD But nothing to worry about. Problem, was when you started writing it, I could follow for a bit, and then I just got lost. Picked back up, and lost again. I can't fully tell what you did with him, but in the end it seems like you left him in shock, like he got smacked in the face by reality
I think you're entry was better, even if Razor was calmer. But mine was just way too dark an bleh. I don't have anymore time for battle city which is why I failed. <:3
So..ink and pencil eh? Hmm.. 
Yeah finish it...or I will eat you. >8D How long does it take to make 1 page anyway?
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o0;! Gramatical errors..?
Hhmm
Hum... oO I think you can make 1 total-finished page in two days, by killing your self.
Grammatical error example: *Razor runs and points at Ana behind him clearly annoyed she is following him* "I have no time for FOOLISHNESSES!" XD That one was hilarious. foolishnesses... you ment foolishness.
"I don't know what you are for here." XD You mean, "I don't know what you are here for."
But you use long paper! What paper is that?! Oo
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Aw
Huuuuh... Please tell me all the mistakes I made, I dont want my comic to sound like a beginner's.
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PShshshs 
They are foolish. This is foolishness. "foolishnesses" is just hilarious. XD
Mmk: *looks for mistakes in awesome comic*
Ok first frame from Kancle: "C'mon there is no reason to run a battle" -incorrect-
"C'mon there is no reason to run FROM a battle."
"Tsk.HA! I bet you're just as idle like me" -incorrect, and I don't know what you were saying there.
"Tsk.HA! I bet you're just as idle AS me."
"Fine.If you're going to intervene in my way my job is DESTROY YOU!" -nope XD-
"Fine. If you're going to intervene in my way my job is TO DESTROY YOU!"
Page3: "Listen I don't know what are you here for.." -you flipped it-
"Listen I don't know what YOU ARE here for..."
by the way wth is with the degree on the end of the 3? you say 3rd place. Oo
"I will smash him to peices for have attacked me in that way." -uh nuu-
"I will smash him to peices for HAVING attacked me in that way." I hope I'm right on that one.
Page2: What Sarah says is a little wierdly written and the ending period doesn't suit.
"I trust you can do whatever you little." Oo Maybe his would be better.. "I trust that you can do whatever you want you little..-"
"You give off the same smell than the alchemist and those damned dark ones." -xX-
"You give off the same smell LIKE the alchemist and those damned dark ones."
Page1: "Aw Sarah don't speak like that or you'll ruin the night"
"Aw Sarah don't TALK like that or you'll ruin the night."
"That sort of dudes mere bragging."
"THOSE sort of dudes are mere bragging."
"I don't want...you die."
"I don't want...you TO die."
omg I can't keep this up my hand is falling asleep. XD
You want more mistake identification?
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The degree? oO That's how you write ordinal numbers, dont you? Well, that's right where I am.
And idle is lazy, isnt it?
Ow darn, I cant help it! I'm not an expert.
Thanks so much Evil XD But I cant go in peace if I know there are more mistakes
No we don't write them that way Kancle. <3 In America we are n00bs and don't want to be like everyone else.
I can see if there are more mistakes, but you have to quit messing with the comic pages, they seemed to have run away from my favorites. XD
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