Micouture [2008-01-24 06:27:09 +0000 UTC]
I must say, you're quite a writer. This piece o' work certainly echoes Edgar Allan Poe's writing style. And the sentence structures and transitions between paragraphs were very well played. Everything flowed smoothly while I read the whole thing. Not one sentence seemed to be out of place. Also, kudos for pitching some French terms and for adding specific details. It was wonderful to picture so and so as I read. Ahaha. Not to be super nitpicky, but your title translate to "The Heart of Death" (Or did you really title it like that? o.O Well, anyways, if you meant to title it that way, then disregard this silly little comment of mine.) Anyways, I believe it's "La Mort de Coeur" if you wanted to title it "The Death of the Heart." Oh, nevetheless, this written piece is absolutely superb. Even I can't think of a story such as this. Seriously, I think it's English AP status! XD. I bet you got an A++++++++++ on your English final. Woohoo!
- Ate Micmic
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