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Shabazik [2013-11-06 14:45:36 +0000 UTC]
LOL. I thought of an image of her shopping for bra's on the mall, putting one after other. XD
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kanyiko In reply to Shabazik [2013-11-06 16:12:57 +0000 UTC]
LOL! XD
Nah, they only consider themselves topless if they are not wearing anything to cover their upper pair of breasts - even if they have a bare midriff (as she has). And even them being topless doesn't really raise an eyebrow, as public nudity is still more or less accepted among their packs, mostly because they still haven't invented any kind of fabric that is able to stretch along with their Werewolf transformation. No right-minded, fashion-aware werewolf girl would want to ruin a perfect set of clothes through transforming out of it!
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wardude69 [2013-10-26 10:04:26 +0000 UTC]
extra nipples ftw
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kanyiko In reply to wardude69 [2013-10-26 12:48:44 +0000 UTC]
Indeed! :3
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MethusTheDeath [2013-10-23 00:54:33 +0000 UTC]
looks good, proportions are right. your lines are a bit rough and soft at the same time lol. I'm not sure if the lines are soft or the scan took a lot of the color out of them. The lines are rough and edges, and a little bit messy. the pose feels natural.
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kanyiko In reply to MethusTheDeath [2017-03-07 20:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the kind critique, and many apologies for the late-beyond-a-joke reply (three and a half years, you can kick me now... T_T )
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MethusTheDeath In reply to kanyiko [2018-08-12 02:34:01 +0000 UTC]
oh no worries at all, life happens. You are very welcome. I hope some of that helps or helped.
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RecklessCharge [2013-10-21 04:36:54 +0000 UTC]
Ahh! I love it! I really like the idea of the storyline progressing that far, with little 'flashback' tags in there like "Mark of Pumori"
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larqven [2013-10-20 07:18:41 +0000 UTC]
The "Mark of Pumori"...Pumori lives!
Do any of these descendants that are called werewolves still have the power to transform?
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kanyiko In reply to larqven [2013-10-21 10:42:57 +0000 UTC]
I believe they still have, despite their wildly varying mix. For reasons Werewolf historians and geneticists haven't been able to fully understand, members of the White Fang family seem to have a very wide range of genetic material, ranging from Werewolf to Elven, Human, Ozcura and Orc; some even having genes from none-sentient canine origins.
Old stories attribute this to the nature of the pack's matriarch around the time of the Second War of the Power. While geneticists have managed to date this change of genetic mix to that approximate era, many outsiders, even within the Werewolf community itself, consider the reason for this change to be a myth, and simply cannot imagine that a single individual would be capable of changing the Werewolf tribes of that era to such a degree that could explain their change in genetic make-up.
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larqven In reply to kanyiko [2013-10-21 18:29:47 +0000 UTC]
To be fair, individual women have a disadvantage to spreading their genes about, relative to men. Although Pumori might have had lots of sons?
And it isn't just Pumori, Hel's mother, Freya, and Fergal, of course, certainly played important parts in the genetic story at that time! Bog, too, lent his own helping--hand.
Fang also, is a bit of a mystery, in trying to understand his origins and genetic contributions.
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kanyiko In reply to larqven [2013-10-21 23:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Don't forget, Werewolves give birth to litters, not singular cubs. So too with Pumori, and already from a relatively (very!) young age. <.<
Of course, Hel too played an important part in how the modern-day White Fang would look, after all she very much limited the genepool to a very narrow one, before Freya and Pumori helped the pack to explode exponentially - Freya by creating stability and relative prosperity, and Pumori by constructing the basis of the modern pack with its diverse genetic mix. Bog too played a part, although a relatively minor one, through Anyiko, her daughter Anko, and her descendants.
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larqven In reply to kanyiko [2013-10-22 08:40:44 +0000 UTC]
That's true, I was forgetting the litter capability.
Young Anko is a "half-Bog". which may be a big effect right there. Plus, there is Bog's ozcura children? I wonder if some cousins have any ability to come into the White Fang from Ozcuras? Imagine what a Bog male Ozcuro could do with his own harem?
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