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Kara-chama In reply to Sayachin [2017-04-04 03:01:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Lucy! ;u;
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MyCrazyArt [2017-03-30 15:25:44 +0000 UTC]
I really like it, and I agree with Kanmii~, but hey, everyone makes errors like this :'D i still do too
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Kanmii In reply to MyCrazyArt [2017-03-30 16:59:17 +0000 UTC]
You can call me Andy ;w;
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MyCrazyArt In reply to Kanmii [2017-03-30 18:07:27 +0000 UTC]
XDD Β kaaayy
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Kanmii [2017-03-30 12:43:49 +0000 UTC]
here I go
1) Eyes
I don't know how to say it ;;
His eyes look like they are kinda looking diffrent directions (?) I think it's mostly because of his right eye. It would look better if you'd move his iris(?) I'm not sure if that's how you call it to the left side . I don't know if you understand what I'm saying so I'll show you:Β sta.sh/01r27ccik80w
2) Body
His body is too small. This body would be probably too small even for child-looking character. I trid to draw how his body would look like It's pretty messy though :Β sta.sh/0y4zhqqpyb9 Β it should be more like this :Β sta.sh/0plnkfy71vq Β I made his head a bit smaller too
I know I shouldn'tΒ criticize you because of this cuz I drew boys with girly-looking body but since you're developing your style right now it's important to go the right way >v<
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Kara-chama In reply to Kanmii [2017-04-04 03:00:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Andy! This'll be very helpful for me! <3
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DarkestStarryNights In reply to Kara-chama [2017-04-05 07:53:23 +0000 UTC]
That doesn't matter. I'll just send you the lineart in an JPEG. XD
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ChrysanthemumSnow [2017-03-30 02:26:49 +0000 UTC]
It looks fine tbh ;w; he's so cute!!
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