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KARLTHEGIANT376 β€” Stranger in the Steam
Published: 2011-08-16 19:23:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 552; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 5
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Description Your head feels so heavy and brittle,
You squeeze your eyes open and gasp.
What's before you makes you feel so little,
So hopelessly, helplessly, sadly you rasp:
"Where am I? Where could I be?"
Then you give a scream, for out of the steam, steps a beauty, a vision, a dream.
Clothes like quick-silver, eyes like coals.
Skin bright like ivory, and soft like a foal's.
Hair that curls 'round and looks like mahogany,
And a voice as gentle as a mid-summer sea.
Your love-sick stomach feels utterly tossed,
He pulls you in close and whispers, "You lost?"
You flutter and stutter and think of a lie,
"No. No, I'm not. I'm fine."
But the glory, the richness, like finely aged wine,
It draws you in closer, to your demise.
"My name is Hades, but what is yours?
No, wait. Don't tell me…let me guess…"
He stands there and ponders, luminescent eyes swimming with promise.
You try to edge away, (Where have you heard that name?) but he sweeps you back up, just the same.
You blush and feel troubled, both at the same time.
In the presence of beauty so strong it's a crime.
And then you realize it's the devil and let out a scream from this stranger of steam.
Sensing this, he draws you even closer, and the lure is now cast.
"Would you care to come with me?" he asks demurely.
By now it's too late,
I've taken the bait.
With a flash and a kiss
I sink deep into bliss.
And float on a cloud of sheer joy.
Now a toy.
When I wake I am startled and let out a cry.
For around me are skulls and stones, mortar, blood, moss and bones.
And I realize where I am.
Hades.
Also know as Hell,
Does that name ring a bell?
'Cause it sure does to me
For I am, you see,
The Mistress of Hades,
Both the demon and realm.
Instead of pencil I clutch a sword at its helm.
As his lady I wonder the dark halls of death,
And as I'm not dead I don't die yet again,
As I throw bones of the unfortunate to Cerberus the hell-hound.
The bones of those who were misery bound.
My only companion inside of my crypt is a stone bat with a chipped ear.
He's the only thing I don't fear.
Archimedes was granted life to keep me amused,
While I wait to be summoned so I can be misused.
And I often think back to that night and wish for a redo.
I'd come back and be new.
If only I hadn't been tricked by his scheme,
If I only hadn't followed the stranger in the steam.
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Comments: 27

Xx-Ann-xX [2011-08-30 00:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Dude, this sounds awesome!!!!!!!

I can't wait to read it!!!!!!!

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Xx-Ann-xX [2011-09-01 21:48:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm kinda busy, though. I'm working on "Up and Blue" pretty diligently.

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Xx-Ann-xX In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-09-03 18:22:45 +0000 UTC]

haha coolio~~~!!!

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Xx-Ann-xX [2011-09-04 23:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, when I say "Up and Blue" I mean "Shades of Blue." I don't know what my head was thinking...

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Xx-Ann-xX In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-09-06 10:19:16 +0000 UTC]

oh, well it's still awesome, either way~!

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Xx-Ann-xX [2011-09-08 20:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Awesome like a poptart cat!

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Xx-Ann-xX In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-09-08 21:51:04 +0000 UTC]

OH YEAH, JUST LIKE THE POPTART CAT!

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Clydensalt [2011-08-21 19:56:34 +0000 UTC]

It sounds very cool, what are you talking about disappointment! D: this is so...different! I'm gonna read the story

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-08-21 20:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but I actually haven't posted any on here yet, you know? I'm trying to get a bunch done before the idea fizzles out like "B.Y.R.D." did. (What a fail...) That's my main problem, I get a great idea but then it doesn't take off the runway. Instead it explodes in the hangar.

I really hope that doesn't happen with my Smurf fan-fic. (By the way, if you are a smurf hater please don't say so, just let me be oblivious to it. I'm very aware that there are people out there who want to stab the little blue dears, but if you're one of them could you not tell me? I'm sure you understand.)

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-08-21 20:09:01 +0000 UTC]

I love smurfs haha, I admit, ashamed as I do, (not reall ) i got a happy meal at McDonald's to get a smurf toy. Gah, im gonna read that one you said failed, just to put a comment on how awesome it was

I understand you with the ideas, I hate when it happens, but then I throw on some music that matches my mood then, and I usually can get it out flowing, although i never feel accomplished! <3

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-08-21 20:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Hilarious, ! I'll have to try the music idea, sounds like good advice.

WHAT?! THEY HAVE SMURF TOYS AT MICKEY-D'S?! EXCUSE ME FOR A MOMENT, I HAVE A FAST-FOOD RESTAURANT TO RAID!

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-08-21 21:14:52 +0000 UTC]

haha aw man, I love you totally The music really really helps.

RAID MICKEY D'S! TAKE ALL OF THE SMURFS!

And to your other comment, heck yes, we could be super awesome fantastic close friends.
(thanks for the watch!)

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-08-22 20:16:33 +0000 UTC]

I'll try it tonight, gonna try and squeeze in another chapter. (By the by, if you can think of a good title for the Smurf fan-fic, please let me know! I've gone totally brain-dead.)

We'll do it together! You bring the duct tape, I'll bring the bananas! Those pimply teens in aprons won't know what hit 'em! (No, seriously. We're gonna have to knock them out with something to avoid getting sent to "the hammer"...got any mallets? )

Yes! Our conversations sure are funny enough, I've reread them and laughed out loud.

You're welcome!

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-08-22 23:21:52 +0000 UTC]

haha ok! I'll think of a title, I'll try at least to help IVE GOT THE DUCT TAPE OH HECK YEAH. I know, the mickey d people take there work serious! Ive got two mallets and three staple guns Our conversations are pretty hilarious!

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-08-24 20:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Why three staple guns?

What are we waiting for?! Onward!

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-08-25 02:52:52 +0000 UTC]

ONWARD MY FRIEND!! < THATS TO MCDONALDS JUST SO YA KNOW.

WE NEED THREE STAPLE GUNS FOR EXTRA PROTECTION! I DUNNO WHY IM YELLING

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-08-25 19:57:55 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S OKAY! YELLING IS FINE!
GOOD! I SUCK AS A FIGHTER AND WILL NEED EXTRA-EXTRA PROTECTION, OR ELSE WE'LL BE DEFEATED CUZ I WILL GIVE IN AND RUN HOME IN TEARS!!!

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-08-25 21:35:18 +0000 UTC]

NU UH I WOULD PROTECT YOU! WE CAN DO IT! even though im tiny D:

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-08-26 20:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Awwww..it's okay. How tall are you? I'm not that big either. We can be cool and short and awesome and thieves at the same time! + =

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-08-27 20:10:05 +0000 UTC]

i'm 5'5!! aww haha I love you!

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-08-27 21:23:08 +0000 UTC]

NO FREAKIN' WAY!! I'M 5'5 TOO! YAY MIDGEE'S!!!

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-08-28 01:38:36 +0000 UTC]

HECK YEAH!

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-09-01 21:58:16 +0000 UTC]

We shall rise up, (very far up so they can see us) and take over the world! Who's with me?!

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Clydensalt In reply to KARLTHEGIANT376 [2011-09-01 23:09:07 +0000 UTC]

I AM!! YUSH! WE NEED TO BE TAKEN SERIOUSLY!

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to Clydensalt [2011-09-08 20:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Serious like a pop-tart cat!

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QQ-ellie [2011-08-16 22:26:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm lovin' it.
It sounds like an awesome idea. Can't wait to read the story

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KARLTHEGIANT376 In reply to QQ-ellie [2011-08-18 19:41:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm working hard on it, I'm about where she is swooping down the death tunnel...don't ask.

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