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BellaCielo [2009-01-18 20:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh lawd-- everybody is so cute here! I couldn't pick a favorite is my life depended on it. I agree with Siya-san, their expressions here get an A+++ in my book!

A/UX-tan is really pretty in panel 1-- no wonder C-quel (and Slackware-tan @@) are in love with her. XD

But wait-- Plan 9-tan is also adorable here. Both she and Plan B-tan are awesomely cute in panel 2, and their expressions in panel 3 (especially Plan B-tan's impish grin) made me laugh. ^o^

Maybe it's her eternal nonchalance, but Plan B-tan looks very tranquil in panel 4, as well.

Panel 5 is probably my favorite of this page-- ragingly rabid Amiga-tan fangirl Drangonfly BSD-tan is lawlworthy, as is Plan B-tan's surprised expression. Well, it's as surprised an expression as she can manage. d:

I also love the dialog here-- but I wonder, how much will the plot thicken? ^^

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C-quel [2009-01-18 00:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Fufu... well just on first glance, the whole page does at least solve the overtext problem. Might have just been a fluke. There's also dangerous levels of cuteness in this thar page... I must tread with caution. ^.^

PANEL 1: The text is shorter, true, but I guess the text itself could be smaller so that the overall text bubble could not hide her ear. After all, I need to nibble on those you know. ^.^

Ah! such a sweet and lavish smile.... *v*

*nom nom nom* ^w^

Oh, and one of the words is cut out of the text bubble. ^^'

PANEL 2: Same for Plan 9-sama's text bubble. I think there's plenty of room over her to resize redistribute the text so taht it doesn't touch the top of the page and her head, but rather stays nice and centered just like Plan B-chan's beautiful little text bubble.

Incidentally, while Plan 9-sama's big floppy ears make her look adorable, PlanB-chan's sweet and innocent face makes me melt. It's so beautifully drawn, I feel like Dora from Finding Nemo when she encounters a bright shiny light....

I Just Want To Touch It.... @v@

PANEL 3: YAY! Tactical Chibi Usage FTW!!!! ^V^
And once again, Plan9-sama is cute, but it PALES in comparison to PlanB-chan's sweet, sly, sarcastic little expression! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!! >v<

PANEL 4: GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >V<
*EXPLODES*

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[speaks in voice from beyond] Seriosly, Katt-chan. Drawing dangerously cute girls in the presence of my fiancé....

I bet you're trying to get me in trouble, aren't ya? `v'

But yes, PlanB-sama is drawn wonderfully here and I could easily say she takes the official MVC (Most Valuable Character) award for this particular Userspace Gang mini-series. So far, anyway.... that could change depending on what you have in store next. ^^

Incidentally, you already did the text on background effect here too -- and while this particular use is intended to be her thoughts, you see how easily it makes a verbose passage of text seem a lot more natural. I have absolutely no problems with this particular setup, other than that "A/UX-san" could be moved to the next line, and the rest of the text shifted over more to the right to give her face and hair a little more breathing room.

PANEL 5: The LOL meter is off the scale here. ^-^
BTW, if you gave me a doll of PlanB-chan right now, I'd probably do the exact same thing that DragonflyBSD-tan is doing there. ^__________^'

Love the micro-chibi Amiga doll... *squeals with delight*... ^.^
...although she's only taking advantage that that's the only opportunity she'll be able to cuddle Amiga-san like that, since the real Amiga-san is way bigger than her. ^___^

And GAWD!!!!! That face!!!!! PlanB-chan's face!!!!!!!! STOP!!!!! THE CUTENESS MUST STOP!!!!!!!!! >v<

*C-quel explodes from beyond the grave*

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siya [2009-01-17 16:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Your expressions are awesome! Great job, as always! ^^

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