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Kaufee — Miss July Vs. Fusiona Pg.1
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Published: 2014-08-31 00:02:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 2206; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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DeviantUniverse August Challenge, ThunderForce Alpha Vs. Dark Legion! Miss July Vs. Fusiona!!!Page #1 fav.me/d7xbf2e
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Comments: 33
If I had more time, I woulda been epic.
Thanks for the feedback
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While I really like the page itself, the word balloons don't exactly flow too well.
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I never claimed this was my best work
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I... didn't say you did... O.o
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Would you like me to go through your art and leave unsolicited critiques that don't help in any way?
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Okay, WOW.
First of all, don't get all uppity because I left one critique. It's not like it's harsh, it's simply an observation, the pointing out of which I thought would better help you with your work in the future.
Secondly, I like critique, and I encourage people to critique my work rather than compliment it because having irregularities or colour/anatomy mishaps brought to light help me to avoid them later down the road. So the threat is a little lost on me.
Thirdly, you are on an art sharing site where anyone is free to say whatever they like, be it good or bad. Granted yes, people tend to be a lot more generous with what they say on here, but if you are not ready for that potential feedback, both negative and positive, then I would not recommend using such a site.
Finally, if you would like that critique more in depth (since it apparently doesn't help in anyway) then here; Typically western style comic books read from left to right, top to bottom. The close proximity of Miss July and Fusiona's first speech bubbles make it difficult, at a first glance, to immediately tell who is speaking first. I, for example, read Miss July's speech bubble first because it was farthest to the right, and had to go back to realize it was Fusiona's that was meant to be read first. Moving Fusiona's speech bubbles up or else (probably the better option) moving Miss July's speech bubble close to directly above Fusiona's second speech bubble will better help the flow of the word balloons. Under her foot may be a good place, as it will form a direct line that the reader's eyes can follow, leading from the highest speech bubble at the top of the page, to the final one at the bottom.
I'll not apologize for leaving criticism on your page, but I am sorry that you've not received feedback of the like in the past that would better prepare you for such a minor critique. This site sucks that way, and I'll not be bogged down by the endless favorable comments.
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Oh I see. You have a lot of time on your hands and out of boredom you leave unnecessary comments. This was at least the second time
Let me know when you post a completed comic page, and I'll let you know when I'd like your opinion.
PS I have no problem with constructive/intelligent criticism, I'm my own worst critic, and I know all the points you made in your speech
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Out of boredom? Really? I looked at a page, noticed something and then pointed it out. That's it.
1.) I have commented on your work three times. Once admiring the way you did the armor shine on your Plasmoid piece. Once making a joke about nipples. Once critiquing (this one).
2.) I have completed comic pages. Many from years and years ago. Three recent. Probably not to your tastes. Furthermore, you don't get to determine whether my opinion is put out there, simply whether you choose to read it.
3.) If you knew all the points then why not just point out that you were aware of the problem, rather than moan that my critique was useless? I'm not a mind reader, how on earth should I know that you're aware of what I'm noticing? It certainly wasn't listed in the artist description.
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You're absolutely entitled to your opinion and free to comment as you wish, but so am I
The size of your replies is proof you have to much time on your hands, I however will not be wasting any more of mine
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Great, I'll be sure to compliment and critique as I see fit in the future. Later.
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I have the need to say this is really awesome!
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And I have to thank you for those kind words! haha
I appreciate the feedback!
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a comment says more than 1000 faves
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I would pay money to see this fight!
Skirts, fishnet, and the definite possibility of nipple-slips. haha
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I don't know about Fusiona. She wears something like a sweater, you'd have tear that thing off in order to reach a nip slip.
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Great page - really pleased you managed to contribute to this month's challenge.
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I was cutting it close, I had another busy month, but happy to contribute something, even if it's not my best work.
Thanks for the feedback!
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Yep, over your dead body, Miss July. That's exactly the idea here
Awesome page!
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Threatening America is a not smart move when Miss July is around
Thanks for the feedback!
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It's that easy to rattle her cage, huh?
You're welcome.
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Thanks, his was another exercise in creating a flowing fight sequence
The feedback is appreciated
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Thanks for letting me use her this month.
Fusiona is one of the original "Big Bads" of the DU and Miss July had to get a piece eventually
I had lotsa fun with her this month
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