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Pages nine and ten are here! I'm still having some spare time so I can post this update. Next two pages will come this week and next week I'm on holiday, so perhaps pages 13 and 14 will be finished then. But after my holiday I've got to keep main focus on my studying so this comic will be put on short hiatus.
Now to the comic itself. Miriam has come to help Rama and is scolding Devon for bullying him, but apparently her lecturing goes to deaf ears. Looking at the sixth panel of page 10, Devon should really learn how to talk about women.
And as you can see, I had a little mistake when drawing Miriams fin with marker on the second last panel of page 9.
Rama, Devon & Miriam (c) me
story (c)
Pokémon (c) Nintendo
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Comments: 12
Ooh! I can't wait for the new pages of this comic! Good work so far!
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Yikes, that Devon is a serious butt.
Also, I don't think he's very smart because he insulted Miriam like that.
Great comic so far by the way
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The way this story is coming to life is just amazing. I just can't stop looking at it. And knowing what comes next makes me even more excited. I can't wait to see the next two pages. Keep up the good work and again thank you so much for creating this comic.
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Glad you like it. I will try to upload the next pages before Pokémon X & Y come out.
By the way, I'd like to ask if the comic has been accurate enough in regard to your story this far? Not counting the extra lines in dialogue and action I've added but in whole.
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In whole it has been the most perfect adaptation of a story I've seen since they made a movie of Jurassic Park. The author of Jurassic Park (Micheal Crichton R.I.P.) also wrote the screenplay for the movie so it was astoundingly accurate to the book.
In other words. It's fantastic.
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Devon, you just don't get it. At least Rama's going to get some comfort coming up, poor guy.
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OK Devon may be a jerk, but he is an adorable jerk, look at that face!
I loved this story when it was just text, but your drawing help make it come to life.^^
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I was thinking the same thing. Even a villain like Devon can look cute sometimes.
Heh, thanks a lot.
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At least Miriam cares about Rama. Not like Devon.
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