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Published: 2007-04-28 23:55:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 159001; Favourites: 1997; Downloads: 1383
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big thanks to again for the beautiful BG work and other help, concepts, and tips she gives me.
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I know it is coming and I see it coming... WOLF FIGHT!!! Β
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I do love this comic already, a lot of hard work had been put into it and I am really looking forward to reading on ^0^
The only thing I would say is that I find it a list opportunity by making the villain be so obvious by looks alongside actions, red eyes are such a stereotypical bad guy thing. I really do like the use of expressions and patronising personality of this character though!
Keep it up!
Sincerely -π»
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(Ps don't listen to those haters, it bugs me a lot the way they act, this is just an opinion and constructive criticism of mine )
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Wait. Swift kill is a girl? I missed that little part.Β
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Wait, Rapier and Swiftkill are female!? Shit, I must have missed that detail.
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Not quiet, you can see she's leaning up and Swiftkill is leaning back instead of standing up straight. However, in the old comic, Rapier was actually half-Blackblood.Β
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`This Comic Is Turning Out To Be So Awesome
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umm how do you pronounce Rapier? RA-PEE-I-ER?
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A Rapier is a type of thin stabbing sword. It is pronounced, RAY-PEE-EER
hope this helped ^^
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yes just what I needed, thanks!
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great! Your welcome ^^
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whats with the name................
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What? Rapier? It's a type ofΒ stabbing sword.
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Still though. Its really close to the word 'rape' you see why am all like 'wtf?!'
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XD It is! I've always read it as "rapey-air".
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ikr? i thought that same thing when i first read it! LOL!!! :3
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you guys have made THE best wolf comic EVER!!!!
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Me and one of my best friends (Ex buddy) Where these wolf. I was Swiftkill, who is leader and still my faveorite <3
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yep, surprising right?
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Wow look guys!!111 It's like the Lion King, BUT WITH WOLVES. SOOO ORIGINAL!!!
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DARN somebody already took my idea then
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LOL, i know
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ya know who Rapeir reminds me of with that attitude and color? Steele from Balto!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I think you should shade them, but other than that it looks badass!
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If I were in Rapier's situation, I'd be bitter too.
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O.O Rapier is a girl!? I never would have thought that o.o;
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awwwwwwwwwwwww I know what happens next now
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I really like the charcters. I think the story-line is great so far, too. And I must say, she looks quite evil, indeed O_o And what is she planning to do with poor Swiftkill?
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Rapier is the most generic looking evil villan I have ever seen. It's so obvious that she is evil.
Not only that, she looks that wolf from Balto.
LOL DESIGN FAIL.
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i know the artist is a balto fanatic, lmao
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I'm sorry, but you have no right in flaming someone's work. They have worked extremely hard in the making of this comic, and if you must say something, make it constructive critism rather than outright trashing it. If you can't even do this, then learn to click the X at the top of the screen rather than making others feel bad!
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If all you are going to do is talk about how bad this comic is then do us all a favor and shut the fuck up.
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Rapier looks like that villain from Balto lol
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