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Published: 2006-01-09 05:34:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1322; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 59
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My first official paid commission work! I'm so proud. *weeps*This is Holyph, and she is an original character who belongs to one of the GM's in an online rpg: [link]
I'm really proud of the rocks in this one. Silly, maybe, but... I am.
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I like her hat^^
Lol, I would have said more but the person above me( ) beat me to it
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Oh, it's truly nice! the rock is very well made and the shading are almost perfect. The patterns of her dress are very original!
May I dare a little critic?? Since it's still in pencil, may you draw again the neck lines?
here my suggestion: the front line of the neck is too stright. make it more sinuous my drawing it like a the 'belly' of a capitol 'D' and make it strart exacly under her. Try it on a print and tell me how does it looks like...
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Wow, thank you! Your comments are always so well-thought-out, I truly appreciate them.
I see exactly what you mean about the neck. Sadly, I've already sprayed the original drawing with fixative to prevent smudging, so I can't alter it any more. However - I did venture a peek in the mirror, and my own neck in that position is rather straight (I think probably becuase 1. I'm really skinny and 2. the female larynx [voice box] is less prominent than the male, so it is less likely to create a curve there), but I see that there should be a very slight curve there. I'll open up the file in photoshop and see how it loks to change that part. Thanks so much for the advice!
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Wonderful job....ItΒ΄s well lined well-proportioned and very clean.
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That's really nice. Specially the rocks and her clothes, good work with the shadows! The rocks turned out veyr good, you should be proud!
And yay for commissions!
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Thank you! Yes, commissions are nice!
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This is really pretty. It's not very complicated, but well done ^_^ I'm going to check out the rest of your gallery now.
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