KeeganatorUSA In reply to JanikaCheetah [2020-07-27 13:39:29 +0000 UTC]

I’m glad that you agree with Mortesen not immediately giving cosium the plans or ways to field modern weapons, this was something I had planned for a while about how Mortesen would handle the new weapons that have been left by the SS. I’m sadden that you think Rakar’s letter was the weakest part. I wanted it to be a reveal of how I hinted about him missing his arm, and felt two paragraphs would not convey the story of the battle. I plan to give a bit more backstory into WW2 Rakar and Aurora’s life in the next chapter. I’m very glad you like the sub scene, as that may very well be the final action scene we get til my next work. To end on, I don’t plan on Mortesen and Athena getting together, but coming to the conclusion that it was time to move on, emotionally at least.

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JanikaCheetah In reply to KeeganatorUSA [2020-07-27 20:10:31 +0000 UTC]

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