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Kefkloud — Kefo's journey through Hoenn: Chapter 4
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Finally! Kefo's big comeback! Let's just hope he doesn't go away for so long again!
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DON'T READ THE REST IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE COMIC YET!!
So... yeah... If you're already tired of deaths then you better get the heck outta here because I must confess that, as this was my first Nuzlocke, it came out to be a darned massacre...
Ok, so here's how this happened, I put Holly out on the first turn of each geodude and then switched to Shawn to throw water gun at them and K.O. them. But then came the Nosepass and I threw Shawn on the first turn instead of Todd, but I reaaaally wanted Todd to level up, so I put Todd in and he miraculously dodged the first Rock Throw from Nosepass, after that I knew I had to switch to Shawn, but for some stupid, stupid, STUPID reason, I ended up making Todd do a Headbutt, which got to be a Critical Hit, but of course, it wasn't enough to even get the Nosepass to a yellow life bar, so after that Nosepass used Rock Throw for the third time in a row (Lucky me) and you know what happened next. Poor zigzagoon.
I also had a LOT of problems on how to redesign a Cascoon, so I just said "Fuck it!" and gave it weird eyes.
Aaaaaaand as I'm using a new program (Photoshop elements 11 instead of the usual 9 I always use), I screwed up with the size and it ended up being EXTREMELY big (4724 x 30000 px) and as such, VERY HARD to draw.
Feel free to leave a comment and fav!
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EDIT: Changed some minor mistakes I made: -Changed text saying "Petalburg city" to "Rustboro City"
-Changed Todd's dialogue that said "They already hed They're chance" for "They already had their chance"
-Added the "Todd fainted" text bubble (As if it wasn't clear enough...)
I STILL couldn't change that damned ultra high resolution that makes it's size 187MB!!
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Comments: 42
I LOVE THIS!!! IT'S AWESOME, DRAMATIC, AND HILARIOUS!!! KEEP IT UP!
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I LOVE THAT YOU LOVE IT!! THANKS FOR EVERYTHING!!! KEEP TUNED!!
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I've been meaning to read your run ever since you mentioned you had started it but I'm a lazy butt and I forget. But I'm glad I finally managed to read what you've come up with so far because it looks very promising! I like the art and the humour. Some of the expressions are just priceless. I also like how you portray things, for example the deaths. The Poochyena siblings part was nicely done albeit sad. People often just portray things as they happen in the game which is fine but I think the way you did it is more interesting. Nice character development, too.
Now if I should give some advice I'd probably say check the pace. The way the comic advances is good, but at times I'm a bit lost or I feel like the comic could use some air in between scenes, meaning either physical space or storytelling. Advancing from a very eventful scene to another one without a proper transition might be a bit too hectic or confusing. I hope you get what I mean, I don't really know how I'd explain this the best. But let's say that in the transition from Freia's death to entering the gym there could've been a moment in between. I don't mean an extra scene but some sort of gap where the reader and the story could briefly take a breath and then move on. Such thing doesn't need much and can be achieved with little things.
Anyway, I'm definitely following this! It's so nice to find a new run to read. :>
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I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for your kind comments!
About the gaps between scenes I know exactly what you mean. In fact I noticed that same thing in the very same scene you mentioned, my first thought was to immediately change it but then, due to problems with photoshop elements I wasnt able to make it longer to add a space between them 
But the fact of reading a comment about you complimenting my comic and giving advice gives me more inspiration, which I needed right now in order to get my shit together and start working on chapter 5, which is taking way too long.
And thanks for the watch too!
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...damn....-hugs- ill miss him...i gave him linkara's 90's kid voice
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We will all miss him. But I dont know what linkara's 90's kid voice is
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look it up and im sure you'll agree with me haha
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Found your run through Nuzlocke forums, have to say that this is quite awesome!
Ohhh my first nuzlocke had quite a lot of deaths in the beginning too.
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Thanks a lot!
Yeah, first times are hard! I had a bad time trying to make my pokemon survive, but they did... At least some of them...
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The deaths are really sad in your comic but I still like this comic!
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Wooo great update man!
I'm sorry for Todd though :C Even though Shawn avenged him awesomely; that water gun was epic
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Thanks... It was a little over-exaggerated but that's how I roll hahahah
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Action packed aw yeah!!! And NOO not Todd, not DEATH! May he rest in peace and satisfaction that the nosepass blew up in a million pieces
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Actually... The nosepass is alive. He just crashed against the giant rock behind Roxanne and ended up under the debris. Kefo doesn't like to kill, even if it is for revenge. He'll probably do it someday though.
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Dame, the death toll is high. Great page though!
You do such a good job drawing the backgrounds and characters that makes me want to start my Sapphire run so I draw Hoenn's everything and everyone... But "The Fall" has to come first. X)
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Really? I thought my backgrounds were the shittiest ones yet!
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Well, maybe they aren't super detailed or anything, but you get the point across really well. The gym in the background of one of the last panels was pretty good and I can always tell where Kefo's standing.
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Well as long as it works it is ok I guess. I'll keep practicing on backgrounds though.
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Goodness ;v; Another death. Don't worry, my first nuzlocke was as also a massacre ;v; Amg. I reaaaally like how this page came out though >v< The little reflection at the end is great, too. So many hard things that have to be experienced so early on but :'d YOU CAN DOIT! *cheers*
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I'm gonna miss Todd ._.
He was a murderer, but i'm gonna miss him.
And i loved the way you did Roxanne's pokémon!
And loved the "plus: your hair is dumb" part XD
And this page looks AWESOME
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It's just that it was difficult to make Roxanne look somewhat "pretty" with that stupid hairdo coming out of her head. I fucking hated drawing it.
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*sigh* He was such an asshole... but I loved him
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We all love the assholes... AN dthey always die first u.u
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That's a lot of deaths man... :< Lets hope they won't be increasing that fast.
Also; shouldn't it be 'Rustboro Gym' instead of Petalburg?
Anyway, good to see you're alive and kicking.
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GAAAAAAAH!!!! I KNEW SOMETHING WAS WRONG WITH THE NAME!!!
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Hehe, ah it's not thát much of a problem x)
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Ah... I... I'll change it later... It's just that... Realizing there is another problem after being so careful is kind of frustrating
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Dude... I só know what you mean.. *gives a pat on the shoulder*
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Wow. How many deaths have you gotten so far? You just started and it seems like you lost a lot...
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WHAT WHERE'D YOU FIND ME
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you will never know *is actually hiding in closet*
you will never know
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HAVE YOU BEEN HIDING IN MY HOUSE
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oh.
OH.
*flies like a faggot in the rain to a new home*
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the wild minecraftcreeper1 used teleport *teleports to AquaticBandage's new home*
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With Todd, they're already 4... And sadly there are A LOT more coming. But who will survive and who will die? That is the question
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Man, this is great!
Too bad about Todd, though.... First deaths are always hard.
Keep up the great work!
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Thanks man! I apprediate it!
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