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Kelaiah — Poetry on a Rainy Day
Published: 2008-08-30 23:43:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 736; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Yet another request from martinatredwall, that of Matthias in his dormroom writing poetry on a rainy day.Ferret-Kel: He's a very brave mouse to travel the tortuous roads of poetry....
Human-Kel: Yes, we'll never be that brave.
Ferret-Kel: (turns to readers) Yeah, y'see, we kinda suck at poetry, so yeah....
Heh, anyway.... don't own Matthias (Jacques, belongs to him) nor his animation-style (Nelvana, belongs to them), and that's about it.
Enjoy!
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I find it interesting that the color of his tunic is opposite. Anyway this looks amazing, Matthias is my favorite!
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so Matthias me mouse, Martin said you were having a writers block so I thought I'd help ya out a bit, with examples!
Matthias: thanks Cal but that really won't be necessary,
me: nonsense, now let's get started. Let's see' Shakespeare, too renaissance! Edger Allan Poe, too graphic! Need something relaxing, here we go, "The Complete Collection of Vogon Poetry".
Matthias: oh no!
me starting to read Poetry book: OH GOD! NO! That's just so, like...... I can't even summon a word for this!
Matthias: Maybe something a bit less...... disturbing?
me: yeah! Lets try this one. "Ode to a Small Lump of Green Puddy I found in my Armpit One Mid Summer's Morn"
Matthias: Isn't that one considered the second worst poem in the universe?
me: How bad could it be? (reads first few lines) AAAAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Gouge my eye's out!
Matthias leaving room: Never mind! I'll ask Cornflower for help!
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I thought that was martin then i saw the clothing colors XD
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Is it just me, or your mouse drawings look taller? They look they're in their 20s (I know it goes by seasons) at least.
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Yeah, you just have to rhyme or have a rthym... I forgot how to spell that. ^^
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Lolz. I think you had it.
Though while that's true in traditional poetry, there's also freelance poetry too, where it doesn't have to rhyme
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Oh yes, that's why I said "or have a rythum or however you spell it! Ugh.
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I agree with martinatredwall. 
That's sweet. I could see Matthias hearing that Cornflower loves poetry, and then he goes off to try to (awkwardly) write her a poem.
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*snerk* Aw, that is so cute!
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I think Matthias is staring at rain, thinking of his maiden, Cornflower.
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