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ฮฌฮปฮปฮท ฯฯฮฟฮฟฯฯฮนฮบฮฎ ฮญฯฮตฮนฯ ฯฮตฮฏฯฮฑ!!!
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I wonder about that shawl she seems to be wearing, and the way it moves around her, like the sea from where she was born......
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I'm sorry I can't be constructive, because I like everything about this photo. Original.
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I feel the fabric is incongruous with the title. I do like the actual photograph of the model, though. It gives her large thighs, wide hips, a bit of a belly, and a pendulous feeling to the breast, all of which is historically very feminine, especially for goddesses.
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The warm glowing light on her skin is great, but I think a cooler blue in the sky would increase the drama and impact.
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i think the angle is perfect, gets the picture out of ordinary 
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I love the warm colorful contrasts here. Great tonality. The only thing I could see being improved on is the cropping. I really love the odd angle, and the lines in the composition. However, The bottom curve of her butt is cut off, just a tiny bit, and if the frame was shifted down just a fraction of an inch, it would create an interesting abstract shape and patch of color. Overall, really nice work.
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I really like the perspective... very unusual (original)...
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spectacular! rembember to salvador daliยดs style very subreal
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this is the best ever comment made to me, thanks
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Good shot. I'd prefer to see a little bit of the face.
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I like it, even though the colors look odd to me, I guess it would work even better in b&w for me.
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I really like it except for the yarn thing she's wearing. The threads really seem too big and bulky for the angle. If she were wearing something more delicate (or maybe just nothing) I think it would work better.
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The peach colouring is really good throughout. I spent 5 minutes just looking at this seeing more every time.
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you are very kind, thank you
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I just wanted to say that the angle is great. It is always interesting to see such a familiar subject looked at in such a way that makes us see it in a new way. My only suggestion, or criticism would be that your model is so much in the middle of the frame. The interesting angle and the interesting pose are in need of a much more dynamic framing than this. It would have bwwn much stronger to have her of center over to the left of the frame so that we could possibly be privvy to what it is that she is looking at. Her gaze is taking us off the frame, not keeping us in frame with the subject.
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thankx a lot, i will up load the other version soon.
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I like the perspective , but its to extreme maybe back up a little, if she were lying down this could work but for now a little to much
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She looks oddly dis-proportioned. But is still nice.
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