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Published: 2015-12-27 13:11:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1148; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 24
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My first Walk-animation. I tried to make it realistic
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Looking good, bro'. I particularly like the gritty texture of the blade!
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Hi!
Pretty good animation already!
The movements of the arms and legs is exactly how it should be.
I think there are just two things I'd improve:
1. The fact that the heads rotates with the torso looks a bit strange. The whole animation looks kinda stiff that way. I'd keep the face direction straight and focus on an up-down movement and hair animation.
2. The torso seems fairly wide. This may be part of the character design so not sure about this one. However, you can try to make the torso more slime by moving the right edge more inwards. Keep the cape and the belt as they are. By having this small "curve" along the right edge of sprite, it may look more dynamic and interesting compared to that straight line you have right now.
I hope this feedback helps a bit.
I've seen a lot of your sprites recently and I think you make some amazing progress! Just keep on going like that.
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Hey, danke für dein Feedback!^^ Ich werde am Kopf noch ein bisschen rumprobieren, bin es nur irgendwie gewohnt den Kopf bei solchen Animationen mitzudrehen xD Am Torso könnte ich allerdings noch etwas verändern.
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