Comments: 22
digitalghost [2002-03-02 06:40:30 +0000 UTC]
try jacking up the contrast on the chick.. her colors don't blend in like they should.. the lighting on her is different then that on the building so itll be intresting to see how you can fix that. looks better every time i see it.
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slave2rave [2002-02-24 05:45:44 +0000 UTC]
The first thing that it remembered me was the clip of Placebo - Pure Morning. Really concept. People walking on the side of towers. I really like it.
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orbital [2002-02-19 23:06:48 +0000 UTC]
This is one of my favorites.
I remember seeing this one a while ago but I guess I didn't click.
I'm here to fix that mistake.
I love this.
The concept of it is absolutely wonderful.
-orb
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adamzapp [2002-02-15 16:37:09 +0000 UTC]
I was going to say what epitomei said, but, she already said it.
Love the idea. Nice work.
What school do you go to?
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epitomei [2002-02-13 17:29:44 +0000 UTC]
this is just delicious.
the only thing i would change, myself:
i would give the girl more contrast, and then fade her into the building a little bit more. something about that faint outline to her is very distracting. though, your imagination is vivid! so basically, its perfect from your angle.
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digitalghost [2002-02-13 17:21:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow, much much better. The guy in the back is incredible.. The only thing now is the lighting on the chick. The color goes fine, but she's lit as a studio shot and the light is comming from above. Tough to fix though. You may want to try just ripping her out, seeing how that looks. It would be just as effective without her.
I dunno, If you need some more Ideas I'd be more then happy to help ya out.
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klf [2002-02-13 07:06:09 +0000 UTC]
i think the elements go well together, good piece.
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inennui [2002-02-13 03:03:57 +0000 UTC]
The building's cast is way too blue, use color balancing to tone it down. It'll make the lady fit a bit better I think
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kgcreative [2002-02-13 02:51:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks all for the comments: I've just updated the image. Any more suggestions?
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digitalghost [2002-02-13 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]
Forgot to ad my vote ;p
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kgcreative [2002-02-13 01:58:45 +0000 UTC]
/me goes back to fix colors... I've gotten that comment before. THanks for pointing it out
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