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Published: 2002-02-13 01:54:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 439; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 21
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Description I wasn't sure excactly where to put this one...
All images are original by me.
This was just a quick project I did for one of my ps. classes.

*Edit*
Fixed proportion and color issues with girl in lower right corner. Better?
Comments welcome.

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Fixed proportion, placing and color issues with girl in the back.

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Fixed the blue-shift in the building.

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blured figure in the background a bit.

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Sharpened foreground, gaussian blur +.3px woman in foreground.

*edit* worked on girl in foreground. Darkened her as a whole, as well as increased contrast in face, and cleaned up messy edges. Hopefully this works better now.
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Comments: 22

apparentlyneurotic [2002-08-09 12:15:37 +0000 UTC]

wow...that sky is so beautiful! and i like how u've got ppl on the side of the building. great shot


- apparently neurotic

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digitalghost [2002-03-02 06:40:30 +0000 UTC]

try jacking up the contrast on the chick.. her colors don't blend in like they should.. the lighting on her is different then that on the building so itll be intresting to see how you can fix that. looks better every time i see it.

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slave2rave [2002-02-24 05:45:44 +0000 UTC]

The first thing that it remembered me was the clip of Placebo - Pure Morning. Really concept. People walking on the side of towers. I really like it.
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orbital [2002-02-19 23:06:48 +0000 UTC]

This is one of my favorites.
I remember seeing this one a while ago but I guess I didn't click.
I'm here to fix that mistake.

I love this.
The concept of it is absolutely wonderful.


-orb

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rebelchic [2002-02-18 21:32:45 +0000 UTC]

wow....

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mygrane [2002-02-16 01:06:31 +0000 UTC]

i love the guy in the back, and the quote, as i've used it before too i think... nothing i posted though. i have the same complaint about the girl in the foreground... too bright, she stands out more than she should...
very beautiful though
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adamzapp [2002-02-15 16:37:09 +0000 UTC]

I was going to say what epitomei said, but, she already said it.

Love the idea. Nice work.

What school do you go to?

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epitomei [2002-02-13 17:29:44 +0000 UTC]

this is just delicious.

the only thing i would change, myself:
i would give the girl more contrast, and then fade her into the building a little bit more. something about that faint outline to her is very distracting. though, your imagination is vivid! so basically, its perfect from your angle.


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digitalghost [2002-02-13 17:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, much much better. The guy in the back is incredible.. The only thing now is the lighting on the chick. The color goes fine, but she's lit as a studio shot and the light is comming from above. Tough to fix though. You may want to try just ripping her out, seeing how that looks. It would be just as effective without her.

I dunno, If you need some more Ideas I'd be more then happy to help ya out.

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klf [2002-02-13 07:06:09 +0000 UTC]

i think the elements go well together, good piece.

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utro [2002-02-13 06:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow. All the other comments are by people that seem to really know what they're talking about. So listen to them over me, but I think this peice is very imaginative. I'm impressed

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plastikwaren [2002-02-13 04:38:11 +0000 UTC]

... I had to stare at this for a while too... Great concept. My nit-pick is that the woman in the fore ground is too sharp. She needs to be blurred out a bit to fit the building. (actualy, I'd prefer the building to be sharpened to fit the girl)

Pardon my obtuseness if you were trying to create a contrast with her sharpness.

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shivikai [2002-02-13 03:14:16 +0000 UTC]

The girl on the background is "sharper" than the building, which makes her stand out a bit but I think it's usual with photomanip..

The colours are nice and soothing, but something about the angle of the house bothers me.. the text gives the the feel that you should rise above, but it seem that the building is falling on the viewer, bending towards me, which in itself is a nice effect.. I think it's because of the corner line of the house, that draws a lot of attention in the middle, and it's sloping downwards to the left. It gives a sensation of falling down to the sky in the background.

The text is a bit boastful but that's egoism for ya. All and all, I really like how it brings out the the perspective, and the chance to think of surfaces in a new way.


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inennui [2002-02-13 03:03:57 +0000 UTC]

The building's cast is way too blue, use color balancing to tone it down. It'll make the lady fit a bit better I think
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5t3iggy [2002-02-13 02:56:59 +0000 UTC]

the people on the wall look cool you pulled that off good. even the shadows. :twists my neck back around: ouch!! hehe, cool work.
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robc [2002-02-13 02:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Ooh - that's surreal - I like
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kgcreative [2002-02-13 02:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks all for the comments: I've just updated the image. Any more suggestions?
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faithwalker [2002-02-13 02:40:13 +0000 UTC]

They pretty much covered it, however this is a fine image.
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digitalghost [2002-02-13 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]

Forgot to ad my vote ;p

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digitalghost [2002-02-13 02:05:30 +0000 UTC]

I stared at this for about 5 minutes to figure out why the figures didn't look like they really would fit in to the situation.

I found out that there not very proportional to the building. That and as stated above, the colors are slightly off. A cool shading effect would be neat here. This is one of those deviations that could easily make DD if a week+ were put into it.

The simple fact that I stared at that for 5 minutes should explain that I like it alot. It has a very nice depth. The original photo is insane, and the way you manipulated it works very well.

Im impressed.

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kgcreative [2002-02-13 01:58:45 +0000 UTC]

/me goes back to fix colors... I've gotten that comment before. THanks for pointing it out

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spunj13 [2002-02-13 01:57:14 +0000 UTC]

maybe it's the colours, but it's sems that the foremost figure (yeah...her)...doesn't quite fit in the picture...the second one does....the shadows work, but the colours on the first one make her stand out a little too much, i think. other than that...it's effective.
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