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khronosabre — Bruised and Beaten

Published: 2013-03-22 15:21:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 750; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 4
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Description Embers and ash floated to the ground like snow, searing his skin on contact, as seventeen-year-old Fiearius Soliveré lay sprawled on his aching back on the floor, his limbs laying at odd angles. Every inch of him felt bruised and beaten. Slowly he blinked his eyes open, letting the ceiling swim into view, wincing as he tried to grasp just exactly how he and Dez had gotten to this point.

He eased slowly to a sitting position, but as soon as he put pressure on his left arm, he let out a yell that no one could hear; sharp pain rocketed through his wrist, straight to his shoulder. Broken bone, probably.

The support beams of the building around him were creaking, ready to give up. And the smoke. It filled his lungs, his throat, his eyes. From what he could tell, Rowland -- their target -- was gone. He’d probably knocked Fiearius out and run off before the whole place collapsed on itself.

Dez was nowhere in sight either. Maybe Dez had gone after him. Maybe he was caught in the fire. Maybe he too was knocked unconscious and left in the thick layer of smoke to choke to death.

Again, Fiearius tried to right himself, but again the roaring pain from his arm was too much. And he was exhausted. That scuffle had taken a lot out of him, as had the lack of oxygen in here. Even if he could sit up, he didn’t know what he’d do. Last he’d seen, the stairwell was blocked by flames. Rowland had made sure of that. It was beginning to seem that the only option he had was to lie here in this crumbling structure and wait for death. He had always assumed he’d die young, but never had he imagined dying before his eighteenth birthday.

Never had he imagined dying like this.


You really should read chapter 25. You really should. Read it, really, do it.
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Comments: 38

Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-06 20:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Must.... Catch.... Up.... I AM STILL BACK AROUND CHRISTMAS TIME I'M FALLING BEHIND OTL
Good news is that school is almost over, so lots of reading time! Bad news is that the suspense is killing me!

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-06 22:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Christmas time?! Catch uuuup. I'm just gonna keep spoiling everything that happens by uploading all the art >o

Also, I tagged you in my journal and it told me to tell you but I didn't want to be a bother so I forgot but now I'm already talking to you so I figure sure

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-07 01:20:04 +0000 UTC]

I actually haven't looked at ANYTHING except this because it was in the "more like this" box. I didn't want to spoil it for myself <3 I have it all in my inbox still, so it's all in order!

I saw <3 I will be doing that when I get on the computer sometime~ always feel free to give silly comments and such, you're never a bother!

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-07 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Well catch up or I'm going to start spoiling things myself Everybody dies. And. Fiearius loses an arm. And. Cyrus quits engineering to become a dancer. Leta leaves the ship. Corra becomes a fashion designer. I can go on.

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-08 00:01:55 +0000 UTC]

OAO AH
I DON'T BELIEVE IT! IT CANNOT BE TRUE!
Fierariussssss! Noooooo! Bad Corra! No! Cyrus you would be a horrible dancer! You're amazing, but not at dancing!

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-09 00:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you should catch up and prove me wrong

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-09 01:23:04 +0000 UTC]

You tempt me. I shall have you know that in two weeks, school is over for the summer. Which means I have unlimited reading time. I shall have you know that within the first month, I will be caught up and hounding you for the next chapter. And then I shall span you. Because I really want to draw Fiearius.

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-09 01:52:09 +0000 UTC]

I am totally okay with all of these things yes yes I am.

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-09 02:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Really really? ^^ I never get sarcasm so....

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-09 03:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Hahah no I'm not okay with you reading my work or drawing fanart of it. Not at all. How dare you.

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-09 23:04:00 +0000 UTC]

xD

Can I ask Fiearius a question? It's silly, but it kills me not knowing.

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-09 23:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Hahah of course!

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-09 23:24:58 +0000 UTC]

How much hair gel do you use, sir? Your hair spikies are epic.

<3

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-09 23:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah none actually. He has that really thick kinda hair that sticks up any which way. And then he lies on it funny and it's just like that. Cyrus' is too, but it's longer so gravity works better on it. And he does use gel to keep it down

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-09 23:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, that's interesting! My hair. It does that. I have to keep it just long enough to have gravity help, but short enough that it doesn't kill me. I'm really interested as to how Cyrus ended up with such dark hair and Fiear got such fiery red hair <3

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khronosabre In reply to Kalik-ing-Away [2013-05-09 23:57:24 +0000 UTC]

Just genetic luck really. Their mum has dark red hair and a couple of the relatives on their dad's side are redheads too. Just happened to pass to Fiear while Cyrus got the typical dark hair his father's family's known for

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Kalik-ing-Away In reply to khronosabre [2013-05-10 00:15:39 +0000 UTC]

That's fun. <3

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sorceress23 [2013-03-23 09:50:36 +0000 UTC]

It is awesome! - the drawing and the part of your story. I must read it!

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khronosabre In reply to sorceress23 [2013-03-23 14:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much

You should totally read it I guarantee customer satisfaction.

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Faithful-Imagination [2013-03-22 21:49:30 +0000 UTC]

WOW! This looks great! You did a fabulous job on it

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khronosabre In reply to Faithful-Imagination [2013-03-22 23:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you!

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Faithful-Imagination In reply to khronosabre [2013-03-24 02:39:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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ElreniaGreenleaf [2013-03-22 18:27:02 +0000 UTC]

I've just finished the update and awwwwww, Fiear!

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khronosabre In reply to ElreniaGreenleaf [2013-03-22 19:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Awww you read the whole thing?!

This is what happens, by the way, when I write the main structure of a chapter It ends up double the normal length...

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ElreniaGreenleaf In reply to khronosabre [2013-03-23 01:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Of course! How could I not?

Heh, my writing muse has buggered off at the moment so despite wanting to write out loads of stuff my brain's just like 'lol, nope' and I end up doing exactly nothing. :/

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khronosabre In reply to ElreniaGreenleaf [2013-03-23 14:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah I've been there :/ That's one nice advantage of working on CL though. It forces me to write and draw even if my brain's all blocky. Sometimes a deadline is all it takes

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ElreniaGreenleaf In reply to khronosabre [2013-03-23 16:04:37 +0000 UTC]

Ah but deadlines make it worse! I start stressing over quality and end up self editing everything after ten minutes. It's one of the reasons I haven't been able to get my own story going properly.

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khronosabre In reply to ElreniaGreenleaf [2013-03-24 04:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww I must be the opposite haha. For the art at least, I have a very strict schedule to get all the pieces for the chapter done. If one of them is coming together poorly, I tend to just force myself to let it go in order to stay on track >_> Makes for some sad, disappointing art sometimes. But it gets done. And then you can just spend the rest of forever wishing you had time to go back and edit everything you've ever done Oh the joys of creation...

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ElreniaGreenleaf In reply to khronosabre [2013-03-30 19:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Artistic types are never happy. I've come to that conclusion after years of procrastinating and faffing about. XD

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khronosabre In reply to ElreniaGreenleaf [2013-04-01 20:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Accurate.

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Miam-Pepin [2013-03-22 18:03:53 +0000 UTC]

nice

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khronosabre In reply to Miam-Pepin [2013-03-22 18:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Miam-Pepin In reply to khronosabre [2013-03-22 19:21:30 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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iHootie [2013-03-22 17:44:57 +0000 UTC]

It looks awesome.

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khronosabre In reply to iHootie [2013-03-22 17:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you

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Nickel-Kyllacuren [2013-03-22 16:00:06 +0000 UTC]

The fire and the smoke looks nice, also I like the colouring and his pose very.. Ok forget it, I love everything about the picture. It has a great atmosphere

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khronosabre In reply to Nickel-Kyllacuren [2013-03-22 16:04:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww I love you ; ;

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Nickel-Kyllacuren In reply to khronosabre [2013-03-22 16:30:50 +0000 UTC]

You deserve it

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