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Description Rainbow: Are you ready for your first hoofball game?!

Overcast:
 Yes, mommy.

Rainbow: Are you ready to win?!

Overcast: Yes, mommy.

Rainbow: ARE YOU READY TO DESTROY EVERYPONY ON THAT FIELD???

Overcast: ........ n-no?

Rainbow: Well you better get ready! It's destroy or get destroyed out there. This is HOOFBALL.

Soarin: Uh, flag hoofball, actually.

Rainbow: Oh whatever, the flag part is just a suggestion.

Soarin: It's... really not.

Sunset: Rainbow! Soarin!

Rainbow: Oh hey, Sunset! What're you doing here?

Sunset: I'm here for the flag hoofball game. Little Sunshine here's gonna play!

Sunshine: Do I have to? I'd rather be at Canterlot with Mama doing princess stuff...

Sunset: Yes, Sunny. Sports are good! You'll learn about teamwork and get big and strong and it's also just really fun!

Rainbow: Huh, I see Sunshine's on the opposite team! Better watch out for this one! *pulls Overcast close to her* She's a killer on the field.

Overcast: I am?

Sunset: Oh.... cool.... *turns, grabs Sunshine's face and whispers to him* Sun, if she's coming towards you, you RUN. 

Sunshine: w-wha

Sunset: YOU. RUN. FOR YOUR LIFE. She will END YOU if she's anything like Rainbow.

Sunshine: I'm less sold on this sports thing than I was initially.

Sunset: Let's go in shall we?

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Rainbow: COME ON CASS! ONE MORE TOUCHDOWN AND WE WIN! 

Overcast: *nods*

Rainbow: SHOW NO WEAKNESS! PILE DRIVE THROUGH THEM!

Overcast: *rolls eyes*

Rainbow: DON'T ROLL YOUR EYES AT ME YOUNG LADY I CAN SEE YOU FROM HERE.

The whistle blows and Overcast is passed the ball. Being as athletic as she is, she gets past her opponents with ease. All except one rather large filly, with blonde hair who goes by the name Honey Crisp. Overcast narrowly dodges her with a spin but before she knows it, she's face to face with the very, very tiny, scared and frail Sunshine. Like real tiny. Not wanting to decimate the small boy, Overcast quickly turns. She avoids crashing into him but she does still bump him over.

Sunshine: OW! OWOWOWOWOWOW!

Sunset: Sunshine!

Overcast: *stops running and looks behind her* Oh no!

Rainbow: I– what the– CASS HE'S FINE KEEP GOING YOU'RE SO CLOSE. NONONONO PLEASEKEEPGOINGTHETOUCHDOWNISRIGHTAAAAannd she's turning around. Great.

Overcast: *drops the ball and runs over to Sunshine* Are you okay?

Sunshine: *sniffles* My hoof. It hurts, it hurts, it hurts! *tears begin welling in his eyes*

Overcast: Oh no, shhhh it's alright! Princesses are tough you know! No need to cry. I can help.

Sunshine: *stops fussing* Y-yeah?

Overcast: Yeah... um.... *picks up Sunshine's flag and wraps it around his hoof* See? Feel better?

Sunshine: I... I DO! Wow thank you, Overcast!

Overcast: No problem!

???: Whoa are you alright kid? You sure did.... get.... tipped over.

Sunshine: Yes I'm just fine Nurse Amber. Overcast did your job for you.

Amber: Huh, that she did. Not bad, Miss Overcast. Methinks you got a future in this kinda thing.

Overcast: Really? Thank you!
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-after the game-

Overcast: *walks over to her parents* Hey mom, I'm sorry I didn't get that touchdown I–

Rainbow: Hey no worries, kiddo. Whatcha did back there was very cool. The only thing better than winning sports is good sportsmanship.

Overcast: So... you're not disappointed?

Rainbow: Eeeeeeeeeeh well I wouldn't say "nooooot" disappointed.

Soarin: *nudges Rainbow*

Rainbow: I'm kidding! You made me real proud today, Cass. For real.

Overcast: *smiles*

Applejack: Good game today, Overcast!

Overcast: Thank you Mrs. AJ! And good job to you, Honey Crisp. You almost got me in that last play.

Honey Crisp: *nods and smiles shyly*

Applejack: Y'all did a great job and all but ah, Rainbow. About that bet...

Rainbow: ....... *mumbles and throws some bits at Applejack*

Soarin: Dash...... did you.... bet on our child winning hoofball today?

Rainbow: NO......................................................................................... well like.... only a little.

Overcast: *shakes head and smirks* Disappointed.

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An Amber cameo? And "'Honey Crisp?' I thought her name was Anjou," you may be thinking. That's another story~

I feel rusty but hey, hope you enjoy anyway!



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Comments: 119

chaunimoo1987 [2020-04-29 16:44:37 +0000 UTC]

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kinda-lost [2019-09-04 04:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow: GIRL TF U DOING??? KICK HER ASS

Overcast: ... no

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RisingBluePhoenix13 [2018-12-28 23:59:17 +0000 UTC]

So when will more of this universe will be shown?

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AnimeFreak2282 In reply to RisingBluePhoenix13 [2019-04-08 02:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Hi Kilala, do you mind if I use this hairstyle for my RanbowxSoarin child as well? I would credit you. Oh only the style, not colours.

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MULTII-FAN In reply to AnimeFreak2282 [2019-07-16 17:21:29 +0000 UTC]

uh you replied to the wrong person pal :/

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XxYayMLPRocksxX [2018-12-15 03:53:54 +0000 UTC]

May I use this for a base? I will credit you, for the original work!

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CrustyCheesecakeCat [2018-09-17 01:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry if i ship it

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spacewolflord [2018-06-20 18:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha

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TheDerpyCartoonist [2018-06-08 07:21:24 +0000 UTC]

I'M JUST SO HAPPY TO SEE AMBER!!! YAY!! (also I intend to write some fanfiction for this new NG Universe!)

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SmilesPerHour [2018-05-22 01:26:49 +0000 UTC]

aww, I'm always sad when I see a little one get hurt, but it warmed my heart to see little Overcast tending to Sunshine's wound. <3

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Darthsylar12 [2018-05-11 00:59:32 +0000 UTC]

Awesome next gen art as always. You haven’t lost your touch. Through you look back the old next gen with cringe your ability to write good interactions between characters is what really made your Next Gen special, on top of best grump princess and her chef pony...StarDel will never die! 

But on to this special ocassion. Soccer mom Dash is such a fun idea, especially since Overcast appears to take more from cool daddy Soarin than hotheaded Rainbow. And of course would be ‘that’ parent to compete with others through their foal. Bet she and AJ set up race courses for their kids the minute they could crawl. Sunset was well done realizing that one doesn’t compete against a Dash without an escape plan, though I’d think she probably get a bit more angry and in Dash’s face for getting her sweet lil babeh boi hurt. Then again she could have mellowed. Sunshine is such a cutie and Overcast was such a sweetie, both deserve hugs and ice cream. Maybe through some sports training with Overcast, the lil Prince can learn to toughen up. And perhaps some Sun can Shine through the Overcast ...sorry couldn’t resist the urge to ship. Also great to see Amber. You always had a special connect with her and then other two members of that crew. Awesome work as always.

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AlexsRealDeviantArt In reply to Darthsylar12 [2018-05-12 09:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Love the interaction between Overcast (Great OC name by the way lols.) and her mother, Rianbow Dash. Reminds me of my family haha. 

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DawnsyBebo [2018-05-10 05:45:26 +0000 UTC]

I gasped and almost fell out of my seat when I saw “Nurse Amber” I’m so happy she’s in this universe too! She’s one of my favorites!

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Doctorwholovesthe80s [2018-05-10 00:23:02 +0000 UTC]

So, you have two Next Gen universes? Or are you overhauling and making a new one from scratch? I'm confused.

That aside, Overcast is a good kid!

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BronyMann456 [2018-05-08 18:47:11 +0000 UTC]

* gets band-aid*

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dawnkyle In reply to BronyMann456 [2018-05-09 22:33:51 +0000 UTC]

I don't remember who is honeycrisppp

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folklore17 [2018-05-08 03:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm confused. Is sunshine a boy or a girl?
...
...nevermind, I read it wrong
Okay new question: why is Sunshine being called a princess? Ligit question, for I am confusedid

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shootingballofgas In reply to folklore17 [2018-05-08 21:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Look at his ref.

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folklore17 In reply to shootingballofgas [2018-05-09 02:30:13 +0000 UTC]

I read it. Still don't get it

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shootingballofgas In reply to folklore17 [2018-05-09 11:47:38 +0000 UTC]

He has two moms. He thinks that Princesses are very important and he loves them. So he wants to be one.

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folklore17 In reply to shootingballofgas [2018-05-09 14:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay? I would have thought that would have taught him to be a great leader. But okay ^^

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shootingballofgas In reply to folklore17 [2018-05-09 16:02:47 +0000 UTC]

-_- I am in no place to explain this any further. You'll figure it out

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folklore17 In reply to shootingballofgas [2018-05-09 16:14:25 +0000 UTC]

;^; I'm sorry, I'm somewhat stupid

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AmberClarity [2018-05-08 02:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Honeycrisp? Eh, many NG characters have this name..

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CitraDrawsLemons In reply to AmberClarity [2018-05-09 18:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Maybe it was Anjou's name before getting her cutie mark, kinda like with Mrs. Cake.

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WildnessInTheWind [2018-05-07 22:39:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh I love it already  I can't wait for more!! Sunshine is so precious  

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HayStarlight [2018-05-07 20:21:25 +0000 UTC]

I loved the Amber cameo. Damn it, I missed you.

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Kyoshyu [2018-05-07 18:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaaaaaw.

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SilkyBell [2018-05-07 14:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh, could it be that Honey Crisp is actually trans?

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0Koji-chan [2018-05-07 14:25:28 +0000 UTC]

. . .  . .Imlove you Sunshine~~~ So cute~~~ So precious~~~~~❤️❤️❤️❤️

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AmberClarity [2018-05-07 14:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Nurse Amber! *grins*

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superwaffle350 [2018-05-07 13:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Woo, Amber cameo! I did like her character a lot. Lot of complexities in her little pony head. 

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iRinda [2018-05-07 13:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Why is it that I can't get over Sunshine's expression?
Mah adorable lil' babu! D,,:

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Morlon01 [2018-05-07 12:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Doesn't feel like you're rusty. You totally nailed the old characters and gave a good impression of your new OCs.

And: AMBERRRRRR!

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RickyDutton [2018-05-07 10:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Heehe, nice little story to go with the image. Still wanna hug both Sunshine and Overcast. ^_^

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KillraptorRex [2018-05-07 07:16:05 +0000 UTC]

AMBER IS FUCKIN BACK. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

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KillraptorRex In reply to KillraptorRex [2018-05-07 07:16:46 +0000 UTC]

She and dove were my favourite characters from the old next gen btw.

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Thr3eGuess3s [2018-05-07 06:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Fookin' love this, these characters feels so much more natural somehow and Overcast is such a sweetie!

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LezzyBugO3O [2018-05-07 05:24:37 +0000 UTC]

I love it! The story was so cute!

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Fikri578 [2018-05-07 05:10:42 +0000 UTC]

nice to see sunset shimmer in the pic

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urzapw2000 [2018-05-07 04:37:14 +0000 UTC]

adorable!!
wonderful picture and story!

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Mimir25 [2018-05-07 04:25:07 +0000 UTC]

I love what a soccer mom RD turned into.

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Wooflan [2018-05-07 04:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice work! >w<

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Sirkylanthered [2018-05-07 03:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Good to know Dashie's still a little bit of a bitch in your new universe XP

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thesaltypretzel [2018-05-07 03:37:21 +0000 UTC]

you still have that knack of good story telling. I hope to see more soon

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nInTeNdOandMore [2018-05-07 02:35:27 +0000 UTC]

so I guess you could say Overcast is your OC--! (heh get it Over-Cast, O.C. original character)   

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werewolf700 [2018-05-07 02:10:44 +0000 UTC]

I miss these.  They're very enjoyable to read.

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NeverLastStanding [2018-05-07 02:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhhhh, those cameos give me life <3 

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XBRandom [2018-05-07 01:58:31 +0000 UTC]

It feels so good to see you posting stories here again    

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Achuni [2018-05-07 01:48:02 +0000 UTC]

"I'm less sold on this sports thing than I was initially"
Same Sunshine same

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