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Description Hooray for lazy shading!!


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Shinzo: Bye Doctor Lily! 

Amber: Goodbye Shinzo. Great work today. If it were up to me, I'd give you a job here right now.

Shinzo: Really? Thank you so much!

Amber: Mmhm. Keep up the good work. I'll see you tomorrow.

Shinzo: Have a good night! *walks out of the hospital*

Amber: *smiles* Sweet girl.

SecurityGuard: Excuse me sir, you can't be here.

???: Please I need to see her...

SecurityGuard: A doctor? Are you hurt sir?

???: N-no but I really need to see her. Please

SecurityGuard: Who?

???: Doctor Amber Lily. I heard that she worked here.

SecurityGuard: She does and you can make an appointment, though I'm pretty sure she specializes obstetrics. I think you may be looking for a different doctor.

Amber: Is there a problem here?

???: W-wow...

SecurityGuard: Oh. Nothing. This stallion is just looking for you. What for, I'm not really sure.

Amber: It's alright. I was about to leave anyways. Right this way.

???: *nods and follows her out of the hospital*

Amber: Alright. What did you need sir? An appointment? Are you and your wife expecting?

???: You.... you look even more like her now.....

Amber: Excuse me? Like who? Do I know you?

Lucky: Amber!

Amber: Oh, hi Lucky. Hi Hot Head. 

Angel: Momma! *runs up and gives Amber a hug*

Amber: Hi baby.

Angel: *stares at the stranger*  Who's this?

Amber: Um.... I'm not sure. Future patient? I never did get your name.

???: I-I... ummm......

Hot Head: Hey, you ready to walk home?

Amber: Just a minute. I'm talking to a patient right now. Think you could give us a minute?

Hot Head: Sure. Come on Angel.

Angel: Okay.....

Amber: Sorry about that. Family *chuckles* So what was your name again?

???: It's um...... Herb............

Amber: ................................... Herb?

Herb: *nods slowly*

Amber: ...................... *hair and eyes dull* Why are you here?

Herb: To see you.

Amber: Why

Herb: I just.... I don't know..... it felt like the right thing to do.

Amber: *chuckles in disbelief* The right thing to do? The right thing to do???

Herb: Amber,  I–

Amber: The right thing to do would have been to keep your promise!

Herb: Promise?

Amber: ............. Did you really forget?

Herb: I made a lot of promises I didn't keep.

Amber: Well, I'm talking about the one where you decided to dump me at an orphanage and–

Herb: Amber, I wouldn't have been able to take care of you. I was unstable and depressed and–

Amber: I know! I get it! And I don't blame you at all for that. You did the right thing.

Herb: W-wha?

Amber: I'm angry because you didn't just drop me off and leave or tell me the truth. I'm angry because you promised that you would be back for me after a couple weeks! Were you even planning to come back at all???

Herb: N-no, but Amber–

Amber: Then why would you do that? Why would you give me that false hope? I sat at the window of that orphanage for MONTHS waiting for you to come back and take me home so we could be a family again! So I could learn how to be an amazing herbalist like you. So you could teach me good morals and life lessons and what kind of boys to love or avoid.  So I could have a dad! Do you have any idea how crappy I felt when you never came back? After all that time? I felt WORTHLESS! *tears start falling from her eyes*

Herb: .......... Amber...............

Hot Head:  Amber? Are you okay? What's going on?

Amber: Nothing, Hot Head. I'm fine.

Hot Head: *glares at Herb and walks back to Lucky and Angel*

Amber: I'm sorry...

Herb: You shouldn't be apologizing.

Amber: I just..... I really thought I did something wrong.... for you not to want me anymore. 

Herb: I apologize for making you feel that way. I shouldn't have lied to you. I couldn't stand to see you sad that day I dropped you off. I wanted to see you smile before I left. And I foolishly thought that by giving you hope, you'd be happy. I didn't think about how it'd affect you in the future....... I'm truly, truly sorry.  Could you ever forgive me?

Amber: .............................

Herb: I fully understand if you can't.

Amber: It'll take time.....

Herb: That's all I needed to hear *gives her a sad smile*

Amber: So is this all you came for? To apologize?

Herb: I was hoping that I could perhaps catch up with you. See how you were doing or if I could help you in any way. But, you seem to be doing amazing on your own, doctor. Your mother would be beyond proud.

Amber: *smiles weakly* Thank you.

Herb: .......................

Amber: ...................... so what now?

Herb: That's up to you, Amber.

Amber: Well, what do you want to do?

Herb: I just want to make things right and for you to have peace of mind.

Amber: Me too.

Herb: *nods*

Amber: I.... I have a family to get to. Will you be here long?

Herb: I'll wait as long as you need.

Amber: I have the day off on Friday. We can talk while my daughter's at school.

Herb: That would be great.

Amber: Alright then. Friday it is. Just meet me here I guess.

Herb: I will. I promise.

Amber: ........ Okay

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Many requests for Amber meeting her father. Thought I'd get it done before heading off to school next week DX

Oh! And Shinzo is kinda like an intern studying under Amber. I'll draw her soon
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Comments: 156

ShaleZookeeper7 [2017-12-11 04:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow...quite the emotional scene there...really emotional...    Still, wonderful fan art! I also love the fact that Amber is wearing a nurse coat! So adorable!!!     

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Marks-Of-Babylon [2017-07-18 01:48:21 +0000 UTC]

The resemblance Herb has to Stardust Balance is uncanny.

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meganhulan [2017-07-17 02:40:49 +0000 UTC]

beautiful and so sad...

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Mistehhhhh [2017-03-19 18:29:13 +0000 UTC]

After reading a lot of your dialogues, all I can say is, R.I.P happiness. But it was worth it.

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evelyncappuccio [2016-08-28 16:30:28 +0000 UTC]

I may have a slight over obsession with the kilalaverse your characters are just so beautifully drawn, you have a real talent

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Lalio97 [2016-08-07 01:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Ok I have officially lost track of all your characters. There are just too many.

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kianamai In reply to Lalio97 [2016-08-07 02:11:07 +0000 UTC]

same

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RhiTES [2016-07-21 18:00:57 +0000 UTC]

You keep breaking my feels!!!!

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grapesdraws [2016-07-11 17:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh the feels! I hope we can see more Amber and Herb interactions in the future!

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Wagusad [2016-06-05 23:40:25 +0000 UTC]

my feels!    

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NightDweller-99 [2016-05-26 04:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Tears.  Nothing but tears.

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Jay-And-Panda-art [2016-04-18 21:00:09 +0000 UTC]

i love her cartoonie mouth XD

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juneopal10 [2016-01-07 01:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Hey I'd be freaked out to if my father after leaving me at a freaking orphanage then years later come back to say I'm sorry for lying that I would come back!

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SuperJordanBlast In reply to juneopal10 [2016-03-03 05:25:34 +0000 UTC]

yup

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Kitty---Katt [2015-12-13 21:23:40 +0000 UTC]

This is the happier version of Meredith Grey with her dad

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Golden-Risuto [2015-10-11 00:02:39 +0000 UTC]

The Stallion looks like John Pilgrim and the Mare like Penny from the game "One Chance" XD

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Little-leprechaun13 [2015-09-09 21:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Lol my name is angel XD

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SkyrimsRain [2015-08-30 07:47:34 +0000 UTC]

I swear herb's exactly like my dad.

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urzapw2000 [2015-08-29 06:43:12 +0000 UTC]

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NXD657 [2015-08-29 00:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Amber: ...

Herb: ...

Amber: ...

Herb: ...Amber...

Amber: ...you... look... like a mess... don't you think you could have cleaned up a little at least?

Herb: well... I was planing on that but... it's long story...


2 hours ago.


Herb: (looks down sees cookie) huh a cookie. (picks up cookie) why would some pony drop a cookie?

(Ground rumbles)

Herb: (looks left sees fillies and colts running for the cookie) uh oh... (runs away) HELP!!!

Fillies and colts: MY COOKIE!!!

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colourmix [2015-08-27 23:55:37 +0000 UTC]

After such Calamity
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Amber: *Catches up with Hot head and lucky* Okay, sorry for the long wait.

Lucky: Wh-who was that?

Amber: *Pauses* Uhh, just a patient lucky, no big deal.

Hot head: *Mumbles to lucky* Something's up.

Amber: Hot head, stop worrying 'bout me.

Hot head: I-...I wasn't! I-.. was just...ugh

Lucky: *Whispers* I'll do the talking Hot head. Just Be quiet for the time being

Hot head: Fine *Catches up with Angel*

Lucky: *Stops walking* Ya' know, Amber, he kinda Looks like You.

Amber:....................So? Lots of ponies could have the same colours! I mean DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY-

Lucky: Amber...

Amber: PONIES THERE ARE IN EQUESTRIA? HECK, I'M A DOCTOR I Practically help- 

Lucky: Amber...

Amber: WHAT?!

Lucky:....He's your Father...Isn't he?

Amber:.................How.....d- would you even KNOW if he was my father?

Lucky: Just...something about him. Hey, your secret is safe with me, ok?

Amber:........................................................................Ok...

Lucky: Hey! Lighten up "Sparkle face" *Pokes out tongue and crosses eyes*

Amber: No-.....NO! *Tries not to laugh* Lucky! Pl-please..

Lucky: *Does faces with silly noises*

Amber: *Starts glowing* St-stop- *Snorts* LUCKY!

Lucky: Catch me if you can!

Amber: UGH, Immma GET YOU FOR THIS.

Lucky: *Runs away laughing*

Amber: *Chases*
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Herb: *Watches* She's so much like her mother. Wouldn't you be so proud, Isis.


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I believe in my Canon, Herb "Knows" luckys parents.

Story Time!


After leaving Amber at the orphanage, herb thought/knew amber would do something great (No matter how old she was). He spent years collecting Newspapers, hoping his little girl would be in their stories. One day however, he found a newspaper, Directly on the front page was 4 unicorns with the title: UNICORN FAMILY DIE IN FREAK ACCIDENT, SMALL COLT SURVIVED . Interested, he read the story. Amber did, however, do something great years later. Which lead him to find her here. When he meets lucky star, he recognises his looks and shows him the newspaper.

Lucky has a sense like his older brother. Sometimes he could rarely sense a presence (AKA. Happy, proud [DEAD]Family)


ENJOY MAH STORIES WATCHERS!

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Golden-Risuto In reply to colourmix [2016-01-15 01:12:19 +0000 UTC]

Cute

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The-raggedy-mare [2015-08-26 05:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh look, it's Arin and Jontro-

Wait… It's not?

WHAT?!?

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jumpitydude [2015-08-23 16:18:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm about to be really mean...

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Amber: Sorry about that. Family *chuckles* So what was your name again?

???: It's um...... Herb............

Amber: ................................... Herb?

Herb: *nods slowly*

Amber: ... Aaaaaand what do you need from me?

Herb: *Taken aback* A-Amber, don't you recognize me?

Amber: ...

Herb: ...

Amber: ... No. I don't.

Herb: Amber! It's me! Your father!

Amber: My... father?

Herb: Yes.

Amber: ... Nice joke. Now, why did you want to talk to me?

Herb: Amber! I'm being serious!

Amber: *Rolls eyes* No, you can't be. My parents are both dead.

Herb: Amber!

Amber: That's the only explanation. He didn't come back because he died.

Herb: A-Amber...

Amber: That has to be why he broke his promise. Now, if you'll excuse me. *Turns around*

Herb: Amber, I'm sorry. I couldn't take care of-

Amber: We're done talking, sir. I have to get back to my family. *Starts walking away*

Herb: Amber-

Amber: Leave me alone! I don't want to talk anymore! *Leaves*

Herb: ... Amber...

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Lucky: Amber, what did that guy want?

Amber: Dunno. Made up some junk about being my father.

Hot Head: W-what? Y-your father?

Amber: I'm pretty sure he was making it up.

Lucky: Did you get his name?

Amber: He said it was Herb.

Lucky: Amber, I'm pretty sure that was your father.

Amber: I know. I just didn't want to talk to him.

Hot Head: Did he tell you why he left you?

Amber: No. I don't think he did.

Lucky: Amber, do you feel okay?

Amber: ...

Lucky: Amber?

Amber: How was school, Angel?

Lucky: Don't change the subject!

Angel: *Grabs Amber's tail and starts walking back*

Amber: *Staying still* Um, Angel Feather?

Angel: Make up to him!

Amber: Angel, what are you-

Angel: You hurt him! Fix it!

Amber: Angel, no.

*Hot Head and Lucky share a look, then grab Amber and start taking her back*

Amber: WAAAAAH! What are you doing! PUT ME DOWN!

Hot Head: You're being a little brat, Amber!

Lucky: You need to make it up to him!

Angel: Mister Herb! Are you here?

Amber: NO! PUT ME DOWN! NOW!

Lucky: He's not here...

Angel: Mister Herb?

Amber: Can we just go home?

*Hot Head and Lucky let go of Amber*

Amber: Thank you! Jeeze. Raise you and this is my reward.

*Amber walks off, Hot Head, Lucky, and Angel share a sad look*

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Headline: Unknown body found near Canterlot Gates.

Shinzo: I don't get why ponies would kill themselves. It's pointless!

Amber: *Looking at the photo of Herb* ... Maybe they feel that way sometimes.

Shinzo: Doctor Amber? Are you okay? You seem distracted.

Amber: ... Just something that happened last night still on my mind.

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I'm horrible.

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Cutepegasister121 In reply to jumpitydude [2016-10-13 00:56:07 +0000 UTC]

he´s an idiot. I don´t get how he´s still alive, he should´ve killed himself years ago

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izzyo816 In reply to jumpitydude [2015-08-24 22:24:47 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO, the tears, the pain!! why would you torture us like this!!! why??!!!!

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jumpitydude In reply to izzyo816 [2015-08-25 00:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Because I can.

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izzyo816 In reply to jumpitydude [2015-08-29 18:30:30 +0000 UTC]

*sniff*
okay...


can you write more?

(haha the pain and tears, need)

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jumpitydude In reply to izzyo816 [2015-08-29 22:43:00 +0000 UTC]

I've left a good number of these "story comments" on Kilala's images by now. If you mean "expand on this", I'm sorry to say that I have no interest in continuing most of these "story comments".

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izzyo816 In reply to jumpitydude [2015-09-11 02:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Aw okay i understand, but you write good stories!

Do you have a fanfic account somewhere I can stalk- er I mean read?

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jumpitydude In reply to izzyo816 [2015-09-11 11:05:27 +0000 UTC]

I have an FIMFiction account, but I don't have all that much posted there right now.

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izzyo816 In reply to jumpitydude [2015-10-22 01:15:47 +0000 UTC]

You can also go on Figment.com

I like it much better because it feels more comfy and open-spaced and organized of a website

I'm there at Izzyo816



but don't read my stuff because I haven't posted in a long while and everything I have published is from one to two years ago o-o

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jumpitydude In reply to izzyo816 [2015-10-22 14:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Is it just another fanfiction site? Or is there something more to it?

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izzyo816 In reply to jumpitydude [2015-11-29 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]

There is much more in my opinion, sure it can be thought of as a fanfiction site


but there are also contests and just go check it out please?

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jumpitydude In reply to izzyo816 [2015-11-29 13:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Okay. I'll give it a try.

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izzyo816 In reply to jumpitydude [2015-12-06 20:38:07 +0000 UTC]

YUS, subdue yourself to the awesomeness of figment.com*evil laugh*

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ShadowWolf6465 In reply to izzyo816 [2016-05-01 21:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Bitch

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pixelheart18 In reply to jumpitydude [2015-08-27 05:20:12 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Lollipopking101 [2015-08-23 10:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Even your lazy shadings are beautiful  0///v///0

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WhiteFreak14 [2015-08-21 04:05:42 +0000 UTC]

I love how old and tired Herb looks. It really sets the the mood for what message is trying to be conveyed here.

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MichealRavencroft [2015-08-20 23:59:15 +0000 UTC]

This moth******** came back?! *snorts* Well, so long as Amber's okay with this then, alright.

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Written-Note In reply to MichealRavencroft [2015-08-21 22:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey, He promised too! Like it was said he never wanted to leave Amber but did because he didnt want her to suffer a bad life with only her father supporting her with the little he could of made, and looking at him in this picture I think that was a good idea.

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MitsukoElric [2015-08-20 13:33:35 +0000 UTC]

My feels are gonna need a doctor... Awesome work! I love your stuff!

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waraiigoe [2015-08-20 13:29:42 +0000 UTC]

This was so emotional ;W; But I love how much character you put into Amber. It's amazing, as usual.

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LinLupin [2015-08-20 07:59:19 +0000 UTC]

SO MANY FEELS


why did I think it'd be a good idea to read this at 2 am?

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Colbyr [2015-08-20 05:09:29 +0000 UTC]

honestly thought hot head would overhear something and try to beat up Herb and Amber would try to pry them away as lucky shielded angel from all the drama

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batw1ng [2015-08-20 00:34:34 +0000 UTC]

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Snail-Duck [2015-08-19 03:26:50 +0000 UTC]

 wait...  

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brunotoru [2015-08-19 03:09:57 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaand Herb never go to the appointment, breaking another promise...

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QinthaMA In reply to brunotoru [2015-08-19 11:08:40 +0000 UTC]

*slaps you for commenting that*

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