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Published: 2016-04-18 00:51:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2463; Favourites: 286; Downloads: 14
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Morning warm up doodle of Charmander!Related content
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I suggest you exaggerate Charmander's line-of-action a little more, by expanding the 'rise' of Char's hips and belly. For the latter, lower Char's belly so its outline doesn't merge anymore with the outline of Char's back-leg.
Char's right hand has a nice flow and 3D look; in comparison, the opposite arm might do with a line added in, that distinguishes the fore-arm from the upper-arm. e.g so the fore-arm 'overlaps' the rest of the limb just a bit, giving it perspective while also sharpening the elbow.
For the feet, changing the size of the claws might add more depth- or it might do the opposite! It depends on a couple things, really, like if you prefer keeping claws all the same size, or emphasising a main or 'big' toe similar to humans or dinosaurs/birds/reptiles.
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Thank you for the really in depth critique!
It's always great to re-evaluate how I can go about improving artwork, or thinking about it as I go onto the next one :3 I always feel so rusty after a few weeks of convention work! Not enough drawing!
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No problem!
Yeah, it can feel so awkward trying to get back into drawing-mode, there are some days where it's like you're just starting out, or something. D:<
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I really like the style you used for the flame here! Nice lighting, too. =)
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My favorite way to design fire is to make it more DESIGN than actually anything realistic.
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Ahh what a cutie! I love how you painted Charmander's flaming tail. 
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It's definitely my favorite part
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Awesome motion and shape in the character! and very interesting use of texture!
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applying texture and shape to art is my favorite thing to do... THANKS!
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I can tell, you're very good at it!
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