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kiki-doodle — Rikki Tikki Tavi #2
Published: 2016-01-06 21:32:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 3801; Favourites: 198; Downloads: 21
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Issue 2 of the Rikki Tikki Tavi comic adaptation I worked on is out! Check it out!www.comixology.com/Rikki-2/dig…
I REALLY enjoyed this cover, and it was fun to focus on the cobras for this one.
Written by Norm Harper
Interior art by Matthew Foltz-Gray
Lettering by Oceano Ransford
Cover art by me!
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Really awesome piece. I love the way you're interpreting all of this environment stuff and how it all feels graphic/cartoonish but also painterly. I like how you're repeating the shape of the leaves in the spider's design and the patterns,eyes and hoods of the cobras. It's very clever.
I only see two things that really bother me. That light strip in the bottom left behind the foreground leaves could be toned down. It's pretty high contrast there and grabbing too much of my attention. Similarly the bright white edge light on the tail in the bottom right could be toned down.
The second thing is the black lines around the mouths of the snakes. It doesn't feel like the same style as the rest of the piece. I would expect those lines to be colored,lighter or not there at all.
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Thank you so much for the critique!
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yeeeeeee pretty snakeeeeeeees
looks amazing! I love it^^
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Really wonderful style 
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
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Oh i loved this it is one of my all time favorite cartoons <3
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I really love the light outlines you used in the background, the effect is awesome
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