Comments: 13
UltimateDracoMeteor [2015-10-07 18:18:11 +0000 UTC]
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I really like how you did the face and positioning. I also feel like your details are amazing and really reflect the nature of this character. I think you've really nailed dragon anatomy, with the way you've drawn the legs, wings, and neck. I also think this is a really original piece of artwork with fairly good techniques and vision, with nice impact as well. I have a couple minor gripes about this picture, but nothing that really hinders its progress. I think at first with this picture, it's kind of hard to tell what everything is, especially in the thumbnail. A way to fix this would be adding color, perhaps. You don't have to do it with this particular one, but if you do anything like this in the future I recommend adding color. But, I overall think this is a great drawing.
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kiki-doodle In reply to UltimateDracoMeteor [2015-10-07 18:57:25 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU! Wonderful feedback!
I agree with you a TON.
I actually played on and off with adding color to it, since unfortunately my approach to inks (just one sketch, ink stuff in) doesn't exactly alllways work.
but I felt it may be nice to leave just the line art in case anyone else ever wanted to color it.
My vision for the colors is that the rose tip on the tail is very reddish while the rest of the dragon is a dense old foliage color, so by color contrast alone, the tail would pop more. I started to shade the line art to show this but decided against it.
THANK YOU AGAIN! I know I can get way better with ink!
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UltimateDracoMeteor In reply to kiki-doodle [2015-10-07 19:44:51 +0000 UTC]
That's a good concept for colors for this, and I totally feel you, I'm horrible at choosing colors for artwork that I draw (which is why I don't ever put it on DeviantArt).
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Edge-of-Elana In reply to kiki-doodle [2015-10-07 18:36:12 +0000 UTC]
You know what, I support you all the way. I can't work with ink because have a touch of OCD. Even if its a small error, it nags at me. So this is like gold in my eyes.
Anyway, good job!
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Edge-of-Elana In reply to kiki-doodle [2015-10-07 19:17:23 +0000 UTC]
Interesting . I sometimes sketch with ink and sometimes I like what I see, in the end though, when I try to replicate it, it turns out bad.
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labetenwar [2015-10-08 14:36:33 +0000 UTC]
Nice! May I ask what tool you are using?
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kiki-doodle In reply to labetenwar [2015-10-08 20:12:08 +0000 UTC]
A pentel ink brush with some zebra pens for a few fine details :3
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