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KillMeHarder — Call me a Dirty Whore

Published: 2007-03-27 03:29:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1038; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 3
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Description You be scissors and I’ll be rock
You cut deep and I just drop
Feel so weak as I smash into your crotch

I’m a liar; I’m a liar I swear
You are layered and I am bare
You won’t stay naked and I don’t care
                                           I don’t care
                                           I don’t care

Please make me I’ll jump so high
Don’t say sad things about your life
When we’re tantric I stay horrified

I could fuck you, make you cream
Hold you down until you screamed
I can call on the worst of me

but...

You still cut, you still wound
And I don’t want to abuse you
Shadows haunt our separate bedrooms

So fine..

You be 'whore' and I’ll be a ghost
And your memories will stalk back
        to rape us both.
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Comments: 13

xWhitePonyx [2008-06-12 00:27:53 +0000 UTC]

amazing
it runs really well
your very talented

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DrowningByWords [2007-05-30 16:00:29 +0000 UTC]

very clever n a captivating use of words
love the take on paper, scissors, stone
at the beginning

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KillMeHarder In reply to DrowningByWords [2007-05-30 22:56:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!!!!!!!!!

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literatureODD [2007-05-30 15:06:13 +0000 UTC]

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KillMeHarder In reply to literatureODD [2007-05-30 22:58:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much
I'm very appreciative of this
I really don't know what to say... for once
thankyou thankyou thankyou!

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flesh-box [2007-03-29 06:14:34 +0000 UTC]

make you cream

yes, I think the rhythm fits better now

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hungerforperfection [2007-03-29 04:38:30 +0000 UTC]

I like the I don't cares. They remind me of Pierre.


You be scissors and I’ll be rock
You cut deep and I just drop
Feel so weak as I smash into your crotch

however I think the best part is this little gemstone at the beginning, it really sets up the emotion for the whole piece.

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KillMeHarder In reply to hungerforperfection [2007-03-29 05:12:57 +0000 UTC]

ha ha i love that song.
thank you thank you thank you kirsterino.
I edited it slightly. added new verse for meganiki's suggestion
does it work better?

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hungerforperfection In reply to KillMeHarder [2007-03-29 15:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes I think it is better. Cool verse there.

I love that song too.

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vestrit [2007-03-28 09:58:44 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS

yes i do.

note me your (home) number.

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KillMeHarder In reply to vestrit [2007-03-29 05:12:10 +0000 UTC]

will do willbur
thank you thank you thank you.

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flesh-box [2007-03-27 07:17:10 +0000 UTC]

'Shadows haunt our separate bedrooms'

That's just beautiful. The opening lines are exquisite as well.

I think if you put another verse in before the last to even it out, it could run better.

<3

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KillMeHarder In reply to flesh-box [2007-03-29 05:11:56 +0000 UTC]

done done done.
is it better do you reckon?
thanks for all megan : D

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