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killswitchbitch β Silent lullaby
Published: 2006-12-19 19:48:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Perched on this bench,Gazing in a sea of barren faces
Heedless of her existence,
Each face belongs to a newcomer,
All with a colorful story to be unraveled.
It is canvassed in their eyes,
Like the clouds trundling above,
Some left vacant by sorrows,
Others shine with happiness,
As if rainbows kissed their eyes.
Drifting on the waves of tales,
Hearing their silent lullaby.
Her own tale hidden in shrouds,
Behind silent jaded eyes.
She is just another nameless being.
Writing down her emotions,
In an ocean of words on paper.
Watching barrenΒ Β faces amble by,
Singing their silent lullabies.
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hehehe thank you
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Didn't really grab me, but there's some nice imagery I think ^_^ Wish I was good at that kinda thing...oh well ^_^;;
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Thank you, it's jsut something to try and get my brain back into it all again
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Don't say that, say it your best work ever so I don't feel quite as useless >_< 
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haha You're not awful, you were only being honest...and I'd much rather someone be honest and tell me that something I've written or what not didn't really grab them, verses saying that it was wonderful or such if it isn't what they are feeling.
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Yes, it's a start. And I want the Prozac to kick in and lift the gloom that enshrouds you and stifles your creative soul. After that ..... check the thesaurus on some of these words. The spelling of "they're" should be "their." I want to see the finished product.
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hmm is it that obvious as to how down I have been recently? Funny thing I used the thesaurus quite bit for this one, but thank you (buries herself in the thesaurus again) hehe
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