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Description Essay Topic 2: Alexandria had her heart broken many years ago, and she had to suffer for 3 years with the same heartbreak. It felt as if she was dead, as if she had nowhere else to go. Her heart felt broken, black, dead, grey, like it could never be fixed. And one day, she gave in to what her mind was saying, she shot the person who broke her heart dead. She cleaned up fairly well, the authorities never expected a thing. She lied as well. She had never lied before in her life, maybe just one or two white lies, but she had never lied on such a grand scale. She felt she was justified, she felt it was justified. She now felt alive, she could finally live in peace.

Do you agree or disagree with the morals in this story? What are your morals? What are your beliefs? Would you lie? Do you think what she did was justified? Do you think lies are justified and are not lies depending on the situation at hand? Write an essay containing a topic sentence, atleast 2 body paragraphs, and a conclusion paragraph.




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the "courage" one and the "never trust your emotions"
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Comments: 20

cri-angel-of-death [2005-07-15 15:08:38 +0000 UTC]

the background's amazing *fave*

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mercurialartist [2005-07-14 23:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Excellent, I think my favorite part is the background, it's so dismal and wonderfully fitting.. @.@

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dibmagician777 [2005-06-29 01:35:40 +0000 UTC]

What a sad yet lovely picture...

Lovely job, as always!

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Allyekhrah [2005-06-27 05:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Actually on a moral scale, there's not much to argue about. She took a person's life away, thus deprived a living being of a/the natural right ( the right to live) for her own selfish needs. That alone can't be justified, only guilt can be lifted in cases such as acting in an emergency situation/ defense/ temporary insanty etc. However, heart- brokenness is an emotional state: nothing more, nothing less, no matter how bad it may be. All humans and animals have to cope with those, some more, some less, agreed, but all in all it's rather balanced. Therefore if her only justification for that murder is her own emotional state, it's not a very good one. Cause by that argumentation, we could all kill anyone just because we just felt like it.

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kippixin In reply to Allyekhrah [2005-06-28 18:46:15 +0000 UTC]

I 100 percent agree.

Though, actually, the only reason I used that example is because it was for the picture.

A lot of people lie, though. That was really the main intent of the question. Everyone in this world lies. White lies, little lies, but some people lie on a grand scale, y'know? Like saying they love someone when they don't, because they say they "didn't want to hurt them" and the lie often seems "justified" because they were put into a trap. though through my personal experience, the person doesn't think it was justified, but it happens a lot. People lie, cheat, and steal, and most of them have an excuse on why they did what they did and think somehow it makes them honest.

It was like, look beyond the first question, and see what the second paragraph was about. There are so many people with wrong morals in this world. And just like in the question (yeh my name is Alexandria XDD Kippixin sounded odd), Alexandria (LMAO TALKING about me in third person is odd) feels that her lies were justified because they helped her in some way, or someone hurt her in some way, etc. But she's not honest, and her morals and views are not right, and sadly, murder happens a lot too. People use excuses, reasons, why their murders are justified. Often even some for ridicolous reasons such as this, heartbreak.

And for the last note I've never murdered anyone nor do I plan to in any sane state of mind. Even in my insane fits of rage, I sometimes have the fear I might, but I think I have that little control.

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Allyekhrah In reply to kippixin [2005-06-29 04:32:46 +0000 UTC]

I did see where you're coming from. It's just, y'know. A fucked up argumentation. If she may murder when her heart was broken- why can't I murder my neighbour for stealing my bread? Hey, I was angry. And who can judge emotions? Who is anyone to judge that I was less angry than she was? How her emotion is more worth or had a stronger effect? Noone can. You can never justify by random emotional outbreaks just because of that fact.
I am hungry. o____o For some reason. lol.

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kippixin In reply to Allyekhrah [2005-06-29 04:49:47 +0000 UTC]

omfg I am agreeing with you XD The only reason I said that was it fit the picture and it was really creepy and I wanted a really creepy description. I am no way agreeing that such a reason is justified for murder.

The only real argumentation is the second paragraph if you totally ignore the real situation at hand of the first I have no idea what I'm trying to say, I mean, I know, I just don't know how to put it since you're still kinna.. I dunno, feels like you're disagreeing with me and I said it was justified or something O_o

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Allyekhrah In reply to kippixin [2005-06-29 07:25:00 +0000 UTC]

OOh ok. Where did you get that description from, anyway? Did you just make that up? o.o And I like your name. I hate mine. ;-;
And I have no idea what I'm saying either. But that happens. Never mind, it's normal when talking to me =^^=

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kippixin In reply to Allyekhrah [2005-06-29 17:15:38 +0000 UTC]

yes I made it up XDDD

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GoatofWisdom [2005-06-27 04:11:20 +0000 UTC]

So pretty... I love the colors in the background for some reason. It's all so perfect with the mood.

I love her hair. And coat. OH SO LOVELY <4

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Venomfan18 [2005-06-26 09:45:57 +0000 UTC]

VERY nice job on coloring the hair and the yellow coat.


And I love how the people in the background jump out at you after staring at it for a little bit going "Kip never just puts one thing this big in a picture. WHERE THE HELL IS THAT OTHER THING"

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kippixin In reply to Venomfan18 [2005-06-26 16:43:55 +0000 UTC]

XDD yeh, mes don't do shots this huge w/o something cool in the BG..

P.S. your gift for winning the contest is like, the second, or third thing next up on "TEH LIST"

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Venomfan18 In reply to kippixin [2005-06-27 21:26:54 +0000 UTC]

I need to put the guide for my anthro's colors, so no hurry. It occured to me a little after I said for you to color it that it was only black and white on her references XD

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BrokenxStars [2005-06-26 06:30:04 +0000 UTC]

._. This is a sad, yet beautiful picture. I love it! Arg. @_@;; That's all I can say. *Sigh*

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Loralit [2005-06-26 06:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done, the colors, the setting, everything .

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CrypticVensy [2005-06-26 04:37:15 +0000 UTC]

There is ABSOLUTELY no way I am going to write an essay. *crosses arms* I just got outta school and you're telling me to write an essay!! Pfft. How cheap. This pic sucks.


HAHA I'm just kidding. O_O Well..I'm kidding about the picture sucking part. The coloring is so beautiful on this. D: And it's such a full picture because you included a well laid out background with something to look at back there, but it's not too distracting to keep your attention off of Kip. Great work!

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Zenity [2005-06-26 04:13:46 +0000 UTC]

...my god this is so cool. O_O... at first I didn't notice the people in the BG but then I was all "WOAH someone's dead"

Wow, this is neat.

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kippixin In reply to Zenity [2005-06-26 04:30:50 +0000 UTC]

LMAO yeh XD they're pulling someone into the ambulance. XD it's kinna hard to see.. on my monitor it's really bright but I dunno what it looks like on a normal monitor.. *looks* holy shit YEH waaay darker XDD lmao it LOOKS KINAN like crap.. XDD kip is more bluetinted.. I guess that's better XD

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Kombi [2005-06-26 03:50:22 +0000 UTC]

oh my fucking god. THIS IS TRUEKY AMAZING KIP! I would favorite this a million times if I could. ;_; It's just so beautiful.

The coloring on this is awesome, especially one your EMT raincoat! god I want that raincoat so badly now! XD Great use of smudge tooling. I also love the background, I'm glad you got it to work, I personally don't like the cloud tool because i'm not good with it and I hardly ever draw clouds anyways! XD But this is proof that you can do stunning things with it. The quotes go very well with the picture and the discription is awesome AND creepy. I love the characters in the background ans kips expression.

omg I said this was going to be long on AIM but I guess it didn't turn out that long! XD

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BaroqueMana [2005-06-26 03:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Ooo i like the colors good job ^ ^.

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