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"Kurokami no / Midaretaru-yo zo / Hateshinaki /Omoini kiyuru /Tsuyuno-tamano-o"

"Even my beautiful black hair is now all messed up, I am leaving this world to become a dewdrop. "

Mrs Hōjō, Takeda Katsuyori's wife, died at 19 years of age.
(1563-1582)
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Comments: 31

StanislavYa [2017-02-12 10:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Great

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to StanislavYa [2017-02-12 23:35:35 +0000 UTC]

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OutlawNinja [2016-02-26 04:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous work.

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to OutlawNinja [2016-02-29 02:37:08 +0000 UTC]

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ShadowRaven2006 [2016-02-26 00:17:27 +0000 UTC]

sad and beautiful

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to ShadowRaven2006 [2016-02-29 02:36:38 +0000 UTC]

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JEBurton [2010-11-09 18:31:35 +0000 UTC]

A Classic pose and style, it is.

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to JEBurton [2010-11-12 00:53:06 +0000 UTC]

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BurpleNurpXX [2010-10-09 17:21:01 +0000 UTC]

Magnificent, the peacefulness even before death. I sympathize your friend.

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to BurpleNurpXX [2010-10-09 23:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the comment!

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Sano-Balron [2010-10-08 12:58:47 +0000 UTC]

A great tanka and lovely calligraphy! !

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to Sano-Balron [2010-10-08 16:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the nice comment! and also

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Izark1369 [2010-09-10 07:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem with beautiful writings

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to Izark1369 [2010-09-10 09:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! Yeah I love this poem, it's so sad...
And

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Izark1369 In reply to KisaragiChiyo [2010-09-10 11:37:21 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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aimalee [2010-04-19 11:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful
What about to put English Translation in your Comments to help the most to read and understand

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to aimalee [2010-04-19 15:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Look closely at the "artist's comments", the translation's there too^__^ ("Even my...")

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aimalee In reply to KisaragiChiyo [2010-04-20 08:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Ooooops!!!
Sorry I just read the first line and I thought it is same thing written in English Text....
Well Thanks to u and you are so welcome

("Evin my......")

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to aimalee [2010-05-05 10:09:31 +0000 UTC]

haha no problem! (and sorry for being so late in replying )

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Ukiyo-e-Geiko [2010-04-18 23:05:37 +0000 UTC]

これは悲しいです。でも、とても素晴らしいですね。

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to Ukiyo-e-Geiko [2010-04-19 08:06:24 +0000 UTC]

戦国時代に生きた彼女の悲しみと勇気が、この歌によく出ていますよね。

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ashigaru [2010-04-12 23:37:23 +0000 UTC]

To become a dewdrop... such is the transient nature of life, right?

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to ashigaru [2010-04-13 09:13:23 +0000 UTC]

absolutely. In death poems you often find this kind of metaphor that refers to flowers, rain, river and so on...as you said, all these things are the symbols of the transient nature of life.

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ashigaru In reply to KisaragiChiyo [2010-04-13 12:59:13 +0000 UTC]

This is truly a wonderful work of art. I do hope that all is well with you, dear friend

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to ashigaru [2010-04-15 11:43:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much^__^

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demon-polecat [2010-04-12 09:59:29 +0000 UTC]

I feel bad for Takeda Katsuyori (no one was ever going to live up to Shingen's legacy) but I feel even worse for the wives of these men, powerlessly tied to them even as they crashed and burned.

The poem really shows how young she was, and as always, you've rendered it beautifully.

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to demon-polecat [2010-04-13 09:08:27 +0000 UTC]

That's right, she was so young....this one really makes me cry. I too feel bad for those wives, they had no other choice I suppose, it's just awful.
Thank you for the compliment, I'm really glad you like it, demon-polecat ^__^

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Bayushi-Tai [2010-04-12 08:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful...
Is amazing the customs of japanese samurai,
they created beauty even when they are about to die,
that's is honour, that's is glory.

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to Bayushi-Tai [2010-04-13 09:02:51 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely, that is truly amazing...I love this poem because it's so sad, yet so beautiful....
Thank you for the great comment

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Bayushi-Tai In reply to KisaragiChiyo [2010-04-13 09:15:03 +0000 UTC]

Always is an honour to leave comments in deviations of
someone i trully admire, remember that ALL your deviations
got a place in my folder of images called "Japan Related"
Thanks for been like you are, here's a hug & a kiss for you !!

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KisaragiChiyo In reply to Bayushi-Tai [2010-04-15 11:47:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you so so much Tai!!!! ^__^

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