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KissingTears — Concentrate
Published: 2006-01-23 18:12:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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There's no way I can concentrate.Not today!
Finding out 'bout things i don't wanna know.
My mind is overloading,
compacted with everything imaginable.
A shout,
yell,
even a whisper
pounds through my head.
Like a hammer to a nail.
As the nail goes deeper
the pain grows more!
Why does this happen?
Sitting next to Pluto
on my left.
While the Sun
on my right.
The fire and ice
goes through the skin
of me.
And yet there is
still no room in my
head to concentrate.
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Sitting next to Pluto
on my left.
While the Sun
on my right.
The fire and ice
goes through the skin
of me.
that is gold my friend
excellent work
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THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!!!! ur the best for giving me that coment!!!!!
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Ooo, heavy. You definately got the effect across with the "Pluto and Sun" thing.
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