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HalanLore [2017-03-22 19:31:19 +0000 UTC]
The colors of the kites are very beautiful. I like the detail on the stall
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HelevornArt [2017-02-23 13:53:20 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful idea to depict a fair! So much colour, and those kites seem magical. And, well, here's yet another side of Al. Great job!
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pheeph [2017-02-21 22:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Very colorful... Those kite designs look nifty...
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SpaceCastaway [2017-02-18 10:19:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it looks totally awesome! I love all the details, diverse colors, things happening in the background, the stalls with all this stuff, so many kites! and the fact you left the foreground empty to properly show Karil and Al, it looks so well planned. Maybe you could cut on the foreground a bit for a better composition, or maybe add a stall or two on the sides, it's a slight change but could add a bit of depth to the overall scene. It looks great already as it is though, you nicely used the cracks and greenery to show something is happening in the foreground. (It's a trick I was taught on a drawing course so if you figured it on your own I can only congratulate you more. )
Both Karil and Al came out amazing, it shows they're having tons of fun, and I'm sure Al didn't expect so literal meaning of FLYING A KITE I literally love this idea
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Kitanokata In reply to SpaceCastaway [2017-02-19 13:36:49 +0000 UTC]
You are right about the foreground. I think I'll just crop the picture. If I start painting over the finished piece right now, it'll definitely end up badly...
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sun--shark [2017-02-16 06:55:22 +0000 UTC]
THis is beautifully detailed! I love all the kites, especially the fish kite C:
You drew Al really well and I really like the subtle detail of the wind coming from Karil!
Excellent job! I wanna go to this festival now haha, it looks so fun!
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StoryMaker91 [2017-02-12 22:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh fun! This is really pretty. I love the colors and all the detail.
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Kitanokata In reply to StoryMaker91 [2017-02-13 20:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, this is one of the most colorful works I've done lately.
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StoryMaker91 In reply to Kitanokata [2017-02-14 02:36:48 +0000 UTC]
Totally worth the effort in my opinion.
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Naefa [2017-02-08 16:09:32 +0000 UTC]
The Kites are really cool and it is so colourful! Cool
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Kitanokata In reply to Naefa [2017-02-13 20:01:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a million!
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UnaOwens [2017-02-07 20:08:22 +0000 UTC]
The kites are so cool and so super fun. I kinda want one of them now lol. Great job!!
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Kitanokata In reply to UnaOwens [2017-02-13 20:01:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Actually, after finishing Karil's kite I too wanted to have it for real. I mean, it's a cool purplish DRAGON!
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Kitanokata In reply to RitellianCaptain [2017-02-13 20:08:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I hope that Al will enjoy a little flight air-master-style and still have some stomach left for the cool foods on the stalls (not shown in the picture).
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Meghan-Dzurichko [2017-02-06 03:24:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I love all of the different kites. This picture is beautiful.
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MegaMaeve [2017-02-05 15:12:30 +0000 UTC]
Those colors are just so lovely! I really, really love all of the details you put into this work - there's a certain fluidity, a liveliness, to this piece I can't quite seem to capture in words!
The bright coloring really set such a happy tone; there's joy in this moment, and those kites are just so pretty, too! The little girl pointing at them in the background is such a nice touch (and I also like the masks that are being sold, as well as the man who's carrying a massive basket of apples! ) - it's so very festive, the fair must be such a great place to visit!
Karil looks pretty happy up on his dragon-kite, and I really like how you indicated his movement and depicted the air flowing around Al. Karil's clothing is so bright and vibrant, and I really enjoy how you mixed all of those colors! And look at the kid's sparkly eyes! He's so cute!
Al himself looks happily surprised, and I greatly enjoy his somewhat uneasy-yet-excited body language! (I also greatly enjoy the coloring of his armor! Such a nice yellowy orange~ ) He probably didn't expect to get to fly like a kite indeed, and it's such a sweet moment! Look at his grin! XD
The flags in the background also look really lovely, and gosh- it just looks like such a fun, summery day, I almost wish I were there myself in Al's place
Such brilliant work! Thank you for drawing the both of them on such a happy occasion!
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Kitanokata In reply to MegaMaeve [2017-02-13 20:06:52 +0000 UTC]
The greatest prize of all is you liking this picture. It was soooooo cool drawing Al, I hope to be able to perhaps do some other collaborations with him (and you) in the future too .
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MegaMaeve In reply to Kitanokata [2017-02-16 19:50:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm absolutely in love with this work, and this is, like, the best present ever! - and I'm so, so glad you enjoyed drawing Al, too! (especially because I greatly enjoy Karil as well! XD)
Gosh, if you'd like to do further collaborations, I would absolutely love that, actually! (I've had several people ask me if Karil would be returning to other, Alwen-centered comics - and I was wondering if I could borrow him for another martial arts session - or perhaps another cross over, because gosh, I honestly enjoyed drawing your kid! )
If you've got any suggestions for a collab, I'd love - LOVE - to hear them, because I surely would love to do some more work!
(That being said, also, would it be all right if I drew some fan art of your story sometime in a nearby future (when I've got some more time on my hands, that is - meaning: in about a week or three? X'D))
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MegaMaeve In reply to Kitanokata [2017-02-20 15:49:11 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU! I'm glad you enjoyed the comic, and that I - having enjoyed drawing their sparring session - would be allowed to make a short follow-up! Personally, I also think the combination of Salep and Alwen interacting would be quite interesting, especially considering both their personalities, background, and martial art skills - and I bet Alwen would quite enjoy sparring with the older man (drawing them spar would be so challenging though, I'm no good at dynamics as of yet, but I've gotta try it sometime; it'll make for good practice for sure!)
As for weapon training with Salep and Al, hmmmm - I know from experience that a sword is NO MATCH for a pole-arm (I practice both handling sword, dagger, and staff/spear, the latter being comparable to a glaive ), and taking Salep's elemental skills into account, Alwen surely would bite the dust; it'd be SO INTERESTING!
Once I've got some more time, I'll probably start working on some fan art/a new installment of 'Karil and Al: Martial Arts Adventures' Thank you for giving me permission! I'm honored!
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SilkyLoaf [2017-02-05 02:41:39 +0000 UTC]
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LordCherryPaw [2017-02-05 00:31:32 +0000 UTC]
OwO OOooooo!!!! This is AWESOME!!!
I lOVE the whole idea of it alll!!!!! *w*
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A-KTheLittleFairy [2017-02-04 21:14:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow the kites look absolutely stunning! I love all the details in your drawing!!!
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Kitanokata In reply to A-KTheLittleFairy [2017-02-05 07:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot ! It was quite the challenge to come up with all the different designs.
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akitku [2017-02-04 13:15:41 +0000 UTC]
Lovely! <3
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