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(Somewhere in Chapter 3)...
“Sophie, do you like working in gardens?”
She brightened at the change of subject. “Yes, why do you ask?”
Shrugging, he replied, “I, just, finally have a use for the greenhouse is all, come see.” He led her into, what used to be empty and barren, green house, only to find it filled with all kinds of plants. There was everything from vegetables to fruits and multiple variations of vibrant flowers and trees. Sophie's mouth was like that of a fish as she tried to find words. “H-how? Where did all this come from?”
“Well, before you accuse me of using my ‘dark creepy voodoo magic’ to make this come out of thin air, that’s only half true. After bringing Ruby here I did a little buying, myself, at the market, and used my transportation spell to bring it all here. I noticed you loved looking at all the plants and figured you’d enjoy your own garden.”
She instantly realized then, ‘That’s why he didn’t instantly show up in the alley, until he heard my cry for help.”
When he saw her tearing up, he feared he might have made a mistake but, was startled when Sophie leaped up and hugged him around his neck, dangling due to his height. Damion wrapped his arms around her to prevent her from falling, he could feel her trembling.
“Do you not like it?” He was sure she would but, now he didn’t know. ‘Why are humans so confusing?’
She quickly reassured him, “No, no, I love it! It’s just that no one has ever done something like this for me. Thank you, Damion, for everything… Thank you.” She gave him a quick peck on the cheek, missing the wide eyed look on his face before she ran off to get Ruby settled into her new home.
WANNA KNOW WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS NOW?! HERE IS A LINK TO THE E-BOOK VERSION YOU CAN BUY ON AMAZON! Plus the comments here can give you a pretty good idea what the rest of the fans think ^W^
www.amazon.com/dp/B01KSJ6S5I#n…
Comments: 140
kitsunefire7 In reply to ??? [2015-11-01 21:36:24 +0000 UTC]
XD lol oh God. Glad you approve of the ship. But reading this old rough draft brings me to tears from all the poor grammar and wording. So glad I improved all the chapters in the final draft. I can't wait to finish the first book as an e-book and try self-publishing. X3
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Neightingale In reply to kitsunefire7 [2015-11-01 22:22:56 +0000 UTC]
Psh, of course! They're just to cute! XD
I know how that is! Oh my gosh! I honestly just ignored it all. 😂
woo! You can do it I have faith in you! -says that with a weird accent-
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General-Kool-Aid [2014-05-22 05:15:12 +0000 UTC]
I liked the original much better myself.
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AZREAL258 [2014-05-09 03:35:16 +0000 UTC]
This picture is much better suited for this chapter, great job
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shadowknight445 [2014-04-23 03:30:55 +0000 UTC]
I can't manage to pull myself away anymore I thinking about what's going to happen next
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kitsunefire7 In reply to shadowknight445 [2014-04-23 03:56:14 +0000 UTC]
XD lol uh-oh sounds like your hooked like the rest of my fans X3
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Moon-chan332 [2014-03-31 05:23:34 +0000 UTC]
eeeeeeeeee!!!! i love this story!!!!
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kitsunefire7 In reply to Moon-chan332 [2014-03-31 05:44:17 +0000 UTC]
^U^ happy u do so far and it only gets better X3
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Azoresangel [2013-12-03 06:48:49 +0000 UTC]
Need to go to bed ... but I cant stop reading this!! GAHHHH WHAT DO I DO?!?!
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kitsunefire7 In reply to Azoresangel [2013-12-03 06:56:22 +0000 UTC]
XD lol go to bed! plenty more to read tomorrow! X3 u could always add me to your watch so you know when i update my ch.s and new pic.s
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Azoresangel In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-12-04 04:05:48 +0000 UTC]
Of course I'm watching you!!!! How could I not with all this amazing writing and drawing you are doing?!?!?! Gosh I'm so jealous!!! But in a good way ... I think??
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kitsunefire7 In reply to Azoresangel [2013-12-04 04:36:35 +0000 UTC]
XD lol well I hope its in a good way! I dont want any enemies! X3
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Azoresangel In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-12-04 05:34:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh but enemies are so fun to play with
But no it is in a good way! It inspires me to want to continue to draw! TO GET BETTER!! ... though ... I don't know what to draw right now ... I'm stuck on a drawing right now and I don't know what to do!
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kitsunefire7 In reply to Azoresangel [2013-12-04 21:34:40 +0000 UTC]
>,< ooh that sucks. I hope you get through your artist block.
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Azoresangel In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-12-06 05:17:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks lovely
And yes it truly does suck ... Well seeing as I don't have school tomorrow I shall work on it then!!
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kitsunefire7 In reply to Azoresangel [2013-12-06 17:29:25 +0000 UTC]
I did the same thing X3... that is.. until my mum made me go clean houses on offices with her. It figures she'd use my day off against me -,- postponing me from updating!
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Azoresangel In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-12-06 18:19:11 +0000 UTC]
Nooooooo!!!!! Evil mother!!!! Why do you do this to us?!?!?!
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NeonAnimeLover [2013-04-17 22:33:42 +0000 UTC]
I love this!
Soo awesome o.o
cant stop reading XD
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kitsunefire7 In reply to NeonAnimeLover [2013-04-17 22:53:40 +0000 UTC]
X3 ty and you still have a lot more ch.s to through XD
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General-Kool-Aid [2013-03-28 23:14:29 +0000 UTC]
The illustration for this one is well...AMAZING!!! You did a great job.
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kitsunefire7 In reply to General-Kool-Aid [2013-03-28 23:25:59 +0000 UTC]
not really -.- I really need to go back and redraw this illustration.
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General-Kool-Aid [2013-02-15 00:37:48 +0000 UTC]
P.S. I noticed your favorite colors seem to be green and gold. I would deduce from that, that you also prefer light purples, deep reds, and certain shades of blue...If I'm wrong, oh well, it was just what I noticed in your writing, I could get it correct if I asked the right questions...OR JUST ASK...BUT WHAT'S THE FUN IN THAT????
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General-Kool-Aid In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-02-16 14:36:02 +0000 UTC]
I'm not curious, just figured I might pick your brain a bit.
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General-Kool-Aid [2013-02-15 00:31:37 +0000 UTC]
Okay, getting interesting, I have to admit even though it's NOT my type of read, it is addicting in a weird kind of way... GOOD JOB, with the irony and the comedic breaks, and the use of emotion/confusion...That last part about the green house...I react the same way Damion did, when someone starts crying like that...This is so weird...DAMN IT..I knew I was cold hearted but apparently I'm heartLESS...LOL
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kitsunefire7 In reply to General-Kool-Aid [2013-02-15 00:35:52 +0000 UTC]
hahaha XD Im glad its addicting X3 or else I wouldn't have readers. They say I really know how to draw them in. LOL I dont think your heartless, cause you dont need a physical one to have feelings; its just an organ.
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General-Kool-Aid In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-02-16 01:29:37 +0000 UTC]
I know, it was a jk moment, you know the sarcastic comedy type of moment...
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LoveLessWings [2013-02-13 19:32:01 +0000 UTC]
oh goodness, you will definitely be getting some fan art from me haha. Loving it, I always read the end first, and I'm pleased to know things go well (besides the relentless blue balling)
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kitsunefire7 In reply to LoveLessWings [2013-02-13 21:47:50 +0000 UTC]
hahaha XD thats great! my b-day will be here at the end of march, so that would be an awesome gift receiving fan art. XD Glad u love it so far ^^ what was your favorite part?
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LoveLessWings In reply to kitsunefire7 [2013-02-14 19:02:05 +0000 UTC]
oh really? Mine is on the 29th of march, I'll do something before both of our birthdays. Besides the hot and steamy parts, loved the part when Damion met Granny, that would be hilarious in comic form.
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kitsunefire7 In reply to LoveLessWings [2013-02-15 00:20:27 +0000 UTC]
I KNOW! I wish i had the time to do a comic, but writings a lot less time consuming. Maybe in the future. Happy early b-day X3
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