Scarlet-Luna14 [2014-07-03 18:12:39 +0000 UTC]
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Hey! Not bad for luna! Just a tip: use bases to look at or trace to get smoother lines and a better pony shape. Also, use smoother lines. Try outlining your drawing in a fine tip sharpie. that will make it pop! Lastly, use smoother coloring lines. Color the same way throughout the whole drawing and blend the colors well. Use the same pressure in your drawing the entire time. Try coloring lightly throughout the whole thing, or darkly. use the same shade and color over the white lines. Hope this helps. You definitely have great potential to be an awesome drawer! Don't stop drawing! Well done!
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EverfreeDemon [2014-05-20 20:58:29 +0000 UTC]
You definitely have the potential to be a great artist. With more practice I'm sure you will be making wonderful art. This drawing reminds me of what my drawings used to look like so keep It up the more you draw the better it gets. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Things to work on would be smoother lines But with more practice you will get better, I did and so can you. Other than that I don't see anything wrong with it specifically, just practice and eventually your art will be eye boggling. So good luck to you I'm going to start following you to see other pieces you do. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
missylyn [2014-05-28 22:52:21 +0000 UTC]
omg I love this
HannaBarberafan0194 [2014-05-21 01:12:56 +0000 UTC]
She looks awesome^^