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Published: 2014-03-30 02:46:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2011; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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My Drawing of Chilbi Rarity.MLP (c) Hasbro
FiM (c) Lauren Faust
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A wonderful piece of art. The curls in the hair are done well!
However, you pressed down on the pencil a little too hard throughout the drawing (i do this a lot too), so the erased lines are still apparent. a good tip is draw lightly before you know absolutely 100% the outline, which is when you should press harder. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
The forehead is a bit big and i think the mane could have been brought down lower on the face, same with the horn, this will the face look more centered and make the whole thing more cartoon-ish and accurate to the show.
The lines are a bit sketchy on the outline, it looks better as a final product if you draw straighter lines. its also useful if you use shapes in base of the drawing. as in a circle for the head, chest, and thigh of the pony.
The nose is slightly pointed and could be rounded more on the end if you want it to look more like it does on the show. but i prefer it pointed as it is. its your own touch to the original pony.
So its a wonderful drawing but could have used a bit more time planning a base!
Just take your time before outlining to make sure everything is centered and shaped properly before adding the outline and BAM! drawing looks more professional. i am using this word because it looks amazing. it just could have higher quality.
so i hope my critique is fair and gave you some useful advice for future projects! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Okay, to be honest, I don't like giving scores below 3 stars. I'm not that evil of a person ^^ Even if something looks like crap, I don't give them 1 or 2 stars. So....yeah let's get started e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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HELLO THERE!!! ^^ I hope this critique is helpful <3
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okie, well ALWAYS start will a sketch ^^
I understand the chibi heads are meant to be big, but it's pretty off.
the chest comes down to low and the snout is too pointy, and needs to be rounded.
The front legs aren't too bad although they need just a touch of tweaking.
the hind leg however is to thick. ^^'
the mane and tail aren't to bad actually ^^ there is a hint a the curls but it's hard to see due to the purple. I say line out the lines with a black colored pencil, crayon, or whatever you use. x3 just to see the curls better ^^
the cutey mark is vary good ^^ although is needs some tweaking aswell ^^ It shouldn't come down to the leg like that x3.
the eyes are pretty low, but again the size of the head doesn't help alot ^^'
I personally skip the under eyelashes. and this is an opinion, like it better without them ^^. I want to say you did a great job with the ear OwO I love the ear x3
the horn as-well needs some work. It's too short >w<
Over-all this is a good picture and I hope this helped at least some x3 there is room for improvement. But I can't wait to see more pictures from you ^^
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I'm trying to be fair when I critique this, but I just can't quite help it.
Her tail and mane were a pretty good start, but it sort of went awry after a bit. Her muzzle is a bit on the pointy side, and her eyes aren't quite in the right place- as well as her ear. The legs could definitely use just a bit of work, as well as the horn (too many swirls).
In short, you tried, but didn't quite make it. Just keep trying; you'll hit your mark, eventually. We all have to practice before getting perfect.
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Um, its alright..
just needs some more EMPH
the lines are crooked..
it wouldve been better if you maybe used marker, and did a sketch..
because it looks like you either 1. Traced it or 2. Looked at something..
but other than that the hair is okay..the anatomy is..uh..
well its a good start C:
just practice some more ^^
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but seriously, Youtube has some great tutorials, and deviantart too!!
I could even help you if youd like e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
Anyways, just pracitice ok? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="40" height="25" alt="
YOU WILL SEE A DIFFERENCE I PROMISE
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ok. a LOT of mistakes. first off, her head is really big. though I think chibis are supposed to look like that, this just looks off. not her body. oh god like, the chest droops down really far. her back leg is way to thick, and I don't see the other leg. Not only that but all the legs look off. its hard to explain. Also, her eyes need to be bigger, and her snout is WAY to pointy. it should be round. the best part I mist say is the hair. its not the best, I mean it looks all crooked, but in this picture it the best, plus you need to learn how to color better, cause on the hair, there are dons of white spots. Oh yes, the cutie mark came out pretty good, but could use some VERY minor improvements. Look up youtube tutorials, those can help.
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I think this critique was a tad too harsh, the drawing has flaws but you could also tell her what is good about it and ways to improve not just point out what is bad with no explanation on how to improve.
Like you said "You need to improve on your colouring" well how does she do that? press harder? maybe try smaller movements of the pencil go over it a few times?
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i have to agree with the critique, but keep trying and improvements will show!
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I have to agree with this critique.
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none of that drawing looked "ok" and "show like".
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I'm gonna be honest, your traditional pony art needs some work.
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I LOVE THIS!w i love her face its like"i am fabulous"xD
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Good for a beginner, but there is a lot of room for improvement.
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Y'know.
I hate ponies but this,,
this is a masterpiece! Well done!
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You know, I sucked at Drawing to.
That's offensive to me.
Seriously.
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I know i still do,That's why i want to spend my spring break trying to improve.
I bet he is trying improve.
Even famous artists are trying to improve.
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There's no need to be rude. Want to be rude to someone who draws bad ponies? Go to my gallery and see a twilight pic I did. It's worse than this. Yes I will admit this is bad, but that doesn't mean they can't improve. Practice makes perfect. And someday they will be there.
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Oh come on dude. It's his/her style
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How about YOU stop it? You wouldn't want ME bashing on your arts, now would you?
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Go ahead. I'd appreciate it. DeviantArt is too much of a hugbox anyway. I hardly ever get useful criticism.
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So, you come here all Ballsy and be like "This is fucking terrible BWHAHAHAH." Honestly, He is going to get better, I gotten better!
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it seems you are not looking at the full context of these comments
hrm
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Eh, I'm not gonna talk trash on your art. I just get pissed off when people just say " omg u suck at art kill urself "
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My response to this particular piece is "try harder", but yeah, the person you were responding to has a history of being belligerent.
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Yep, practice makes perfect. (:
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No, it doesn't. It really, really doesn't.
Skill doesn't form in a vacuum. You can't just draw the same bulb-headed stick a thousand times and expect to magically improve by doing so. You have to actively seek out new things to try, you have to actively fix the problems in your work, you have to actively study the things that other people have done successfully, and in the case of visual arts you have to actively strive to combine aesthetics and reality.
The wrong kind of practice can actually make you worse by ingraining bad habits.
"practice makes perfect" is not only an empty platitude, it's so wrong that it's harmful to anyone who actually takes it at face value.
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While I agree with your comment, I have to say that it's up to him. Art isn't something you study or learn. It's something you experience. I mean, look at me. I suck at drawing, but I gotten a lot better over time. It's about choosing your own style. That's why I said he has potential. Every artist has potential. So his art does not suck
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In other words, only perfect practice makes perfect.
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I don't know about that. My art use to be way crutty than my art now. But with my practice, I got better. And I am very lazy in looking at tutorials. So how did I improve slightly?
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when did I ever say anything about tutorials
my official position on tutorials is that tutorials suck
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You don't have to be mean. He works hard on this you know.
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Like, you say he works hard on this, but that's blatantly not true. I can see every stage of the process that brought this image into being, right down to the lopsided circles he based this image on.
Working hard on an image means sketching, and resketching, and then redrawing the sketch and agonising over getting the composition just right, and then looking up anatomy references and redrawing the whole thing over again. It means studying the lighting, and the way the colors interact, and then lovingly rendering each shape, facet, and angle. It takes time and dedication. It means keeping the things that work and throwing out the things that don't.
This image was not the product of hard work.
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I visited his page because I noticed how shitty his art was when it turned up in one of the dozens of groups he submits it to. I mean, it was even worse than the usual dredge that turns up in that kind of group, and that's saying something.
I would have just added it to my 'shitty art references' folder and moved on without saying anything, but then I noticed his love for attention-whoring drama-churning anti-stamps, and also that his profile says that he is 22, which is pretty sad if it is true.
So here I am, commenting on how terrible this is.
Cheerio!
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Stop being rude if you don't like it shut up and get out.
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He has an excellent point though... This is prolly the worst rarity I've ever seen....
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There is not such thing as the best or worst. Everyone's art is different and that's what makes each of us unique
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Bad art that doesn't have any effort put into it isn't necessarily a bad thing. I shitpost on occasion myself, y'know. I'll even be using your work as a reference. I genuinely like it for how terrible it is.
but don't be a hypocrite. You certainly make it clear to the world when you don't like something.
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What are you talking about i put effort into my art and i actually put details into my work.
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Did you do some warmup sketches/gestures from reference before you started?
Did you refine the first draft of your sketch, correcting anything that was wrong with it in the process?
Did you pay close attention to your source material?
Did you consider the way light and color interact?
Did you do any of the things I mentioned in my other post about 'effort'?
If you honestly did all or even most of these things, then I guess I have to respect that.
Otherwise, try harder.
Unless you don't want to try harder, of course. I can respect that, too. Like I said, I shitpost on occasion. I wouldn't tell anybody else not to.
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I don't think that telling this guy how awful his artwork is is going to get him to draw any better. It is obvious
that he doesn't take his art as seriously as you do yours. Some people just aren't serious artists.
Also maybe he has a sort of problem with his ability to draw as some of his drawings almost look as though
they were drawn with some difficulty.
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