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Lunanimaux [2023-04-20 18:52:57 +0000 UTC]
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lois1cute [2014-01-26 15:33:19 +0000 UTC]
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First of all, I'm sure 90% (if not all) of the fanbase will absolutely adore this (myself included). It's quite like a fantasy made into reality xD. Thank you Kiwa for making this.
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(1) Colours are great and well-balanced. I like how the background seems blurred, making the character literally the focus of the piece.
(2) Character design is fabulous :3. yeah, he looks very handsome. However, at first I had a slight problem with his hair. Don't get me wrong it looks great, but considering how Elsa's hair was styled, there's this expectation of a more 'styled' hairstyle.
(3) I love your animation style: his hands are graceful, the ice thingy's are pretty, and I like how you put in a substantial amount of body movement. But this may need more refining and smoother transitions. It suffers from awkward pupil resizing...well, not all people are bothered by this anyway.
Overall, it's an awesome piece. It successfully achieved its purpose: Fulfilling fan's dreams. Keep up the good work! ^^
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Scyoni [2014-01-23 13:27:33 +0000 UTC]
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Vision: Clearly you knew what you wanted here, and you executed it as you wanted it. A male version of Elsa in the most popular scene of the movie is a pretty straightforward sort of idea.
Originality: It's fanart and by definition I can't give it 5 stars, and the 'male version of a female character' thing has been done to death - but you know that already e.deviantart.net/emoticons/letโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/> for being what it is, it's good. It is the first animation of a male version I've seen, and for being copycat fanart it does hold closely enough to the original while still using your own wok. Good job!
Your technique is pretty good. I'm guessing you used the original scene as a reference, and the overall movements are realistic- no broken arms or funny fingers here! You do, however, have a severe 'boiling' problem, and most of it comes out of your shading. With lines popping in and out of existence and moving around frame to frame this sort of thing will happen. Give yourself a bit more time to animate, and use the traditional method with key drawings and in-betweens instead of making the drawings in order if you haven't already, and with practice you'll be able to do away with the wavering lines and inconsistencies.
The overall impact for a bit of fanart is great. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I don't usually look at much fanart, but I am here. Despite the few things that lost you points it's still a nice piece to look at, and it's fun to wonder about male Elsa and how that story would have been different with 2 brothers... hmmm. Keep drawing, keep animating, and always have fun with it.
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Kauritsuo [2014-01-22 23:39:29 +0000 UTC]
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I am gonna get slack for this critique and people are probably gonna say this is unfair, but Im going to do it anyway, and if you get mad then so be it.
First off. This is fairly cute.
The design doesn't seem too far fetched you translated Elsa's outfit and look to this design fairly well. the magic doesn't look bad, if you added more of a shine I think it would of read better, the lighting is nice and I like the shadows/ how you cell shaded (as in the colours).
However.
This animation is ALL OVER the place. Every single line bubbles/doesn't match up. and not just the lines. The shadows the eyes the crown. Everything. Its so jarring it hard to appreciate this piece.
This could turn into a great piece if you took the time to keep your volumes, followed arcs, had followed a path of action...
I know you most likely just drew ontop of the original or something to get the motions. But this isn't even well done copying. NOW Im not 100% how you did it, but I can only assume.
I truly believe if you took the time it would of turned out stronger. But being an animation major and working in the field, I cannot look past the boiling.
Its a good first attempt and I know why people love this, because its a fan animation of a MALE version, so everyone all star-y eyed, and thatch fine. I appreciate it like the next person. I just hoped this could of been stronger. I really recommend redoing this with things you've learned and see how you make it, because I can guarantee it will be tons better.
Again. I do not mean this as an attack, I am merely looking at the piece in itself. I have seen your work and its lovely. But this is lacking the re fineness that it needs.
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MayuAmuHinamori In reply to ArchiverDelta [2014-01-23 02:44:23 +0000 UTC]
I believe this was great I've seen the movie twice :3 and I think this is AMAZING!!!!! <3
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neofeliss [2014-01-22 22:02:08 +0000 UTC]
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It's rare to see a lot of animations of the front page of dA, so I just had to check this out. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/bโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
First off, the things that works. As a fellow animator, it is hard as BALLS to get your shadows to follow through, especially in terms of shading and coloring. The shadows on the tunic and in the cape are excellent in that regard! The clothing in general looks very fluid and definitely follows the movements of the body. The expression and body language are also great. ^_^
In terms of techniques, this definitely has some hits but a few misses. You have some very lovely poses here, but the problem is they don't seem to flow together in a nice, consistent manner. Going back and polishing the frames you already have and maybe adding some more in-betweens might make the animation smoother and cleaner.
Other than that, pushing the lighting on the snowflakes would honestly make this pop even more!! This is supposed to be the moment when m!Elsa realizes how beautiful and incredible his gift his, so pushing the lighting would add to that revelation even more. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/bโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
This is great overall, though - keep up the great work!!
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Acartoonlove123 In reply to Hiiragi-san [2014-01-23 20:25:42 +0000 UTC]
that's just my opinion there is nothing wrong with it as far as I see
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Hiiragi-san In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-23 21:21:50 +0000 UTC]
You clearly didn't comprehend what I said... I said your opinion is fine, but that doesn't make it a valid critique. When you critique something, you are analyzing and evaluating the quality of the subject, and offering suggestions on how the artist can improve it. Simply saying stuff like "Fuck da haters! This is perfect! 555555 stars!" is a great compliment, but it isn't an actual critique. That's why I said you should have saved what you wrote for the regular comments section.
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BeastCrafter In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-23 07:39:07 +0000 UTC]
This kind of thought process is artistic poison. Please do not critique someone's work again until you know what you're doing. :/
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Acartoonlove123 In reply to BeastCrafter [2014-01-23 19:25:25 +0000 UTC]
well that is just my opinion and your just going to have deal with it
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BeastCrafter In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-23 21:27:04 +0000 UTC]
My unnamed possession can deal with it, sure. However, I will not. Your opinion is uneducated and toxic to all artists around you. This kind of mindset, in large enough quantities, will lull an artist into a false sense of satisfaction and skillfulness, stifling personal growth and improvement (deviantART in a nutshell, in all honesty). Do you understand that? In attempting to defend this artist, you are only inflicting figurative harm upon her.
Is praise nice to receive every so often? Of course. It lets an artist know that they're doing something right. However, this preposterous amount of smothering that you (and I'm sure others) have provided... it's sure to cause more harm than good.
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Acartoonlove123 In reply to BeastCrafter [2014-01-24 19:43:57 +0000 UTC]
you should real calm down how is this going to affect you in any way in the future.
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BeastCrafter In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-25 02:31:51 +0000 UTC]
I can assure you that I've been calm. Must be that silly human inability to pick up tone through text.
Just because something isn't your problem doesn't mean you should just blatantly ignore an issue.
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Acartoonlove123 In reply to BeastCrafter [2014-01-25 09:26:40 +0000 UTC]
Can u just learn to shut up for a change and deal with t
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BeastCrafter In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-25 15:44:41 +0000 UTC]
If you have nothing of significance to add, I think you're going to have to take your own advice on this one, hun. ;>
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BeastCrafter In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-25 22:55:52 +0000 UTC]
This just reeks of desperate "I MUST be the one to have the last word!!1" XD
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Acartoonlove123 In reply to BeastCrafter [2014-01-26 09:03:38 +0000 UTC]
I dont i just want to prove a point that ppl have opinions lol
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BeastCrafter In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-26 19:35:34 +0000 UTC]
Of course. But not all opinions are equal. Say I like apples and you don't. That's all well and good. Those opinions don't affect anyone. But there are plenty of opinions that do; your critique being an example of one. You can't just resort to "But it's my opinion so deal with it!" every time you receive backlash for something you've said. I know it's a bit of an extreme jump, but how about the Ku Klux Klan (which is totally still a thing, albeit an incredibly small minority)? Should we just deal with their opinion that white peoples are superior to others and that other races of people deserve fewer rights? I should hope your answer is no.
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Acartoonlove123 In reply to BeastCrafter [2014-01-26 21:32:55 +0000 UTC]
seriously in every comment you have said u always have to go into some deep smart ass point about it. I DONT GIVE 2 FUCKING SHITS
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BeastCrafter In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-26 22:22:35 +0000 UTC]
You don't give two shits? But you replied. With caps lock. surely you give at least one.
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tinymochi In reply to Acartoonlove123 [2014-01-22 19:15:23 +0000 UTC]
Acartoonlove123,
I'm sorry, but your critique as well as your attitude is very childish.
5, 5 ,5 ,5, 5 .... Stars?
"they know nothing about this lovely piece of art"
"good good good good good BRILLIANT"
Yes, you may like Kiwa's art, but...
Do know know anything about animation, or even how to animate yourself?
Critiques aren't supposed to be like that. It should point out mistakes and show the positive side of the deviation as well. This would be more appropriate as a comment. Critiques can sometimes seem harsh, but that's only for the well being of the artist. Kiwa will not improve with critiques like these.
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Acartoonlove123 In reply to tinymochi [2014-01-22 19:20:27 +0000 UTC]
but it is all fine and that is just my opinion so deal with it ya twat
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decembertiggerX [2014-01-22 15:58:36 +0000 UTC]
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First of all, good effort made. It's difficult to animate so many layers even for a piece that's just a couple of seconds long, and the fact that you've lined each one nicely and cel shaded all of them is something to admire. The colours are pretty, and overall the aesthetics are quite pleasing.
The main weakness I see in this piece is volume consistency; the wobbly animation is quite noticeable and is a bit distracting. In the first half, you can clearly see the eyes shifting a lot in size. The same applies for the crown, and the cape on his shoulders jump around a lot. It would be better for you to nail down the volumes and shapes early on in the sketch phase before moving on to lining and colouring.
I must say I quite like the fingers and hands, and the arcs they make are quite nice, especially for the right arm. If you get the frame by frame consistency down, this piece will be much stronger and more fluid.
Also nice work on the snow effects. You could probably make it nicer by giving the sparkles a more noticeable glow, and by lowering the opacity of the layer so that it'll be more translucent/otherworldly. Oh, and it would be a nice touch to control the opacity to fade them out as they disappear, too!
Keep up the good work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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cabbij In reply to yannevold [2014-01-22 14:48:46 +0000 UTC]
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yannevold In reply to cabbij [2014-01-22 19:13:33 +0000 UTC]
Well, I assumed that they wanted it to look as much like the original scene as possible.
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cabbij In reply to yannevold [2014-01-22 19:47:28 +0000 UTC]
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