ivyhawthorn [2004-09-01 06:06:26 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I feel bad for critiquing since my art is WAY down below yours, but since you ask for an opinion... hmm... I think her right boob (right for her not you) is a bit pointy, perhaps a rounder edge. And her other boob seems really saggy. Her right arm where it comes out from behind the boob looks just a little tinsy winsy bit wanky but I can't tell you how... sorry...
Other then that I think it's set to be a really good piece of work! ^_^
(I still feel bad for critiquing this...)
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