Comments: 42
Stealth-yasumi [2009-08-14 01:46:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I already love where this is going dude! Great job...
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sweetsakura3 [2009-05-21 18:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Hey
Nice story.
Here's some advice I can give about your writing style...
You do need to edit a bit.. why don't you download a trial version of Microsoft Word 07? You just need a bit of an edge to your vocab. Also try formatting your dialogue a bit.
All in all, good story.
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to sweetsakura3 [2009-05-21 21:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the advice, I always try to find ways to make my stories better. ^^
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to sweetsakura3 [2009-05-22 01:06:10 +0000 UTC]
No, no! Advice like that can't sound nice, I knew that you had good intentions the entire time. ^^
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Osaka-chaness [2009-01-15 11:12:31 +0000 UTC]
Yo! Finally reading this! xD (more like...part of it xD)
Was really good! So what...Zenshi can tell peoples favorite anime characters? xD
So this is where your signature quote is from...or is it the other way around? xD
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to Osaka-chaness [2009-01-15 19:40:13 +0000 UTC]
You got it right, I wrote this before my quote. Thanks for actually reading it. ^^
Zenshi has seen so many anime that he can basically tell an otaku's favorite character by noticing their mannerisms and if they wear clothing that the character did. He's got some strange skills like that. XD
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to Osaka-chaness [2009-01-16 05:26:35 +0000 UTC]
Well the main character can do anything since I have control of the others >D
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to Osaka-chaness [2009-01-16 05:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah but I don't make the characters fall to the main one all the time xD
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Felt-heart [2008-12-14 19:07:41 +0000 UTC]
I loved this part " I take it you don't remember me..." The male faked being hurt. "That hurts man..." He pointed to his where his heart is located. "Right here..." he said sniffling, before bursting out laughing." I was laughing at that! ^^
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to Felt-heart [2008-12-14 19:20:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I tried to go for something that I would do to an old friend after a while. The manhug thing in there actually came from one of my good friends, we started that in 7th grade and now it's everywhere! ^^
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to Felt-heart [2008-12-14 19:30:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad that someone finds my stupid stuff funny. xD
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Boktai85 [2008-10-05 01:13:31 +0000 UTC]
good job...not what i origionally read but good.
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PBandJayGirl13 [2008-09-04 15:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Aw, Ty this story is so cool! ^////^ I like it and it could be an actual anime about teenage life or something. ^_^
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to PBandJayGirl13 [2008-09-04 21:23:01 +0000 UTC]
Only if My Chemical Romance gave the company use of their songs...>>
It will be later in the chapters but it changes from calm to something completely different. Thanks for the fave and comment by the way ^^
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PBandJayGirl13 In reply to KnucklesrulzXD [2008-09-05 22:40:42 +0000 UTC]
Of course Ty. Um...can I confess something to you? Its just something I feel bad about and I have to tell you.
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to PBandJayGirl13 [2008-09-05 23:05:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh well that's just how you are I can't hold it against you. My OC story is on hold indefinitely I don't know when I'll even touch that one again...I'm having fun doing the LandMyne story. ^^
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to PBandJayGirl13 [2008-09-06 05:08:27 +0000 UTC]
Nah we've had those stupid warnings for years and years. Its no big deal.
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PBandJayGirl13 In reply to KnucklesrulzXD [2008-09-08 12:56:35 +0000 UTC]
It poured like hell up here and humid...I didn't set foot outside until the next day. =_=
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to PBandJayGirl13 [2008-09-08 21:32:20 +0000 UTC]
God you're lucky I wish it rained more here I love the sound of it hitting my roof. ^^
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PBandJayGirl13 In reply to KnucklesrulzXD [2008-09-09 12:28:33 +0000 UTC]
Aw...I dont like warm cuz i hate humidity that comes with it. It turns me into a monster =_=; I like the cold. ^_^
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KnucklesrulzXD In reply to PBandJayGirl13 [2008-09-09 22:17:19 +0000 UTC]
I like the cold too. I'm more inclined to do something when I have to do it to keep warm. The winter is when I usually go off and walk around my town. ^^
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